tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-51011261123693821762024-03-13T08:29:02.656-07:00Jenni EnzorOn the writing and reading of booksJennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.comBlogger234125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-88133334965211572572022-12-07T00:00:00.038-08:002022-12-07T00:00:00.227-08:00#ISWG: What I've Learned Lately + December Question<h2 style="text-align: left;"><span style="background-color: yellow;"><span style="font-size: large;"><b><span style="background-color: white;"></span></b></span></span> <div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"></div><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjoLszeEKbeDZwsqlB4JKnLmD4bYRhhamWfMPfCtcrZjyw58f069KI6P0l8TLqUW3JaU0klU6_1Fax2BcZLF5T8Rm_5NrGY0L8jfYjCnAf3vGbekd95b7ueaiDgQxbCvE_ek265Y8LGm9PZHwEWEJj3MAvqhqH3NUpGvtL3ISkQxscXPtB_bxlE9Ic4dg/s7862/annie-spratt-jPfsYM-6Bcw-unsplash.jpg" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="5896" data-original-width="7862" height="240" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjoLszeEKbeDZwsqlB4JKnLmD4bYRhhamWfMPfCtcrZjyw58f069KI6P0l8TLqUW3JaU0klU6_1Fax2BcZLF5T8Rm_5NrGY0L8jfYjCnAf3vGbekd95b7ueaiDgQxbCvE_ek265Y8LGm9PZHwEWEJj3MAvqhqH3NUpGvtL3ISkQxscXPtB_bxlE9Ic4dg/s320/annie-spratt-jPfsYM-6Bcw-unsplash.jpg" width="320" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><span class="rTNyH RZQOk">Photo by <a href="https://unsplash.com/@anniespratt?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditCopyText">Annie Spratt</a> on <a href="https://unsplash.com/s/photos/holidays?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditCopyText">Unsplash</a></span></td></tr></tbody></table><br /></h2><h2 style="text-align: left;">December Question: Are the holidays a time to catch up or fall behind on writing goals?</h2><p>I do write more over the holidays usually because I’m a teacher, so those two weeks off are golden. But there are also a lot of family activities and events, so I often don’t get as much done as I’d like. So far, I haven’t been getting as much writing done this month, but Winter Break is coming.</p><p style="text-align: left;"><br /></p><h2 style="text-align: left;">Making Mistakes</h2><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><img alt="https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/7/70/Bob_at_Easel.jpg" src="https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/7/70/Bob_at_Easel.jpg" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;" /></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><span style="font-size: xx-small;">from Bob Ross Incorporated</span><br /></td></tr></tbody></table><h2 style="text-align: center;"> </h2><p>My husband recently asked me, “What if writers saw their mistakes as happy accidents?”<br />I’ve been also thinking of how I approach my other artistic pursuits. I crossed a huge hurdle with painting when I told myself, “I will make a mistake with this project. But that can be fixed (or made part of the painting).” What if we did that with writing? I’m doing that right now by writing in longhand first. It’s allowed me to treat this draft as a practice run, and that’s helped me deal with my perfectionist tendencies. </p><p><br /></p><h2 style="text-align: left;">Writing from the Heart</h2><h2 style="text-align: left;"> <div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjJvSGAyHfj_yuvEWq-W3JHOBsEf0r6g3IyxOvMfX9__fcmR19MdCXYX1Jmy7wDKFTpd7HlgXccbL09NEUhRUr_Vy3e5VweYAnEng5l_rUNQLiu5iiJC9E3xJM0fUN7y-8wMzf4KOPBvZEfLdnYtZ2Y_P9-he6AUhUUBQmYgoQosD9Pg2TdarSexpiEDw/s717/swiminpond.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="717" data-original-width="474" height="320" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjJvSGAyHfj_yuvEWq-W3JHOBsEf0r6g3IyxOvMfX9__fcmR19MdCXYX1Jmy7wDKFTpd7HlgXccbL09NEUhRUr_Vy3e5VweYAnEng5l_rUNQLiu5iiJC9E3xJM0fUN7y-8wMzf4KOPBvZEfLdnYtZ2Y_P9-he6AUhUUBQmYgoQosD9Pg2TdarSexpiEDw/s320/swiminpond.jpg" width="212" /></a></div><br /></h2><p style="text-align: left;">I'm currently reading <i>A Swim in a Pond in the Rain: In Which Four Russians Give a Master Class on Writing, Reading, and Life</i>, which is amazing. I really liked Saunder’s commentary about Turgenev’s "Singers." This story is about a singing contest where a technically correct singer loses to the singer who sings imperfectly but with soul. Saunders talks about how this story gave him insight into his own writing. For a long time, he wanted to be a “classic” writer and write “important” stories. Then he caught his wife laughing at a funny poem he’d written. He realized that maybe he wasn’t the next Hemingway, but more like Dr. Seuss. This made me think about my own writing. Am I trying too hard to be like one of my writing idols? Or am I writing what is in my heart, even if it doesn’t seem as great or important?</p><p><br /></p><h2 style="text-align: left;">It’s okay to say no.</h2><p>This year I’ve taken on an extra position at work where I mentor other teachers. I love this, but one problem is sometimes I’m so busy helping other people that I neglect my own teaching and planning! With writing, I often get so busy with helping other people or doing social writing stuff (conferences, webinars, etc.) that I don’t actually write. I’m learning it’s okay to say no, to put that oxygen mask on, so to speak, so I can get my own writing done. I’ve stepped back from critiquing at least for a season. And that’s allowed me to put more energy into my own stuff.</p><p><br />What about you? Do you write more or less during the busy holiday season? What is helping you this month with your writing?<br /></p><p>Wishing all of you a lovely holiday season!</p><p></p><p><span style="background-color: yellow; font-size: small;"><span><span style="background-color: white;">If you'd like to read more ISWG posts or sign up, please go <a href="https://www.insecurewriterssupportgroup.com/p/iwsg-sign-up.html">HERE</a>. You won't be disappointed.</span></span></span> <br /></p><p style="text-align: center;"><span style="background-color: yellow; font-size: small;"><span><span style="background-color: white;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgAqli_HBNBHVLJDPuuHmrOk76sm-qNCr4kfMo78fT5VEFD5PSTH0w8fXZnBCvOyjj7jLT2xWpYtSLxUUJnj1sId9z9CaIWs_Lq6QgAf5KpH_lZ_8lGVArtMXcNcBbwzOAHgTpqg7ay2ZJgJC33ZifEaiVahoc9dIVsZqfYEx7i66CLX88HmpGHqR9OLA/s320/Insecure%20Writers%20Support%20Group%20Badge.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="315" data-original-width="320" height="315" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgAqli_HBNBHVLJDPuuHmrOk76sm-qNCr4kfMo78fT5VEFD5PSTH0w8fXZnBCvOyjj7jLT2xWpYtSLxUUJnj1sId9z9CaIWs_Lq6QgAf5KpH_lZ_8lGVArtMXcNcBbwzOAHgTpqg7ay2ZJgJC33ZifEaiVahoc9dIVsZqfYEx7i66CLX88HmpGHqR9OLA/s1600/Insecure%20Writers%20Support%20Group%20Badge.jpg" width="320" /></a></span></span></span> <br /></p><p><br /><br /></p><p><br /><br /></p>Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com11tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-71188565888251306852022-10-05T00:00:00.001-07:002022-10-05T00:00:00.194-07:00#ISWG: Finding Time to Write<p> </p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhYNjxS9X2Mh7hcKD88ycxqsfjO2G2GXvqi3JukS8K62HWcGzMsXRt2g6o4wV-8ahBk7RnZJuCS8wFzD3F0xTFWetXp_4Vh352XcLGKKYDa4iE5WGhjymrymx_FORuSfAFYklSNK9WDG6yuvPMGrFixGietl4Myl-Qygc9PUnp5DKFZz5fKXzhB6VbK0A/s5616/carli-jeen-15YDf39RIVc-unsplash.jpg" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="3744" data-original-width="5616" height="213" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhYNjxS9X2Mh7hcKD88ycxqsfjO2G2GXvqi3JukS8K62HWcGzMsXRt2g6o4wV-8ahBk7RnZJuCS8wFzD3F0xTFWetXp_4Vh352XcLGKKYDa4iE5WGhjymrymx_FORuSfAFYklSNK9WDG6yuvPMGrFixGietl4Myl-Qygc9PUnp5DKFZz5fKXzhB6VbK0A/s320/carli-jeen-15YDf39RIVc-unsplash.jpg" width="320" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><span class="rTNyH RZQOk">Photo by <a href="https://unsplash.com/@carlijeen?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditCopyText">Carli Jeen</a> on <a href="https://unsplash.com/s/photos/morning-writing?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditCopyText">Unsplash</a></span></td></tr></tbody></table> <p></p><p>I’m having a hard time figuring out what to write this month.<br /> </p><p>I read so widely, that it’s hard for me to pick a genre for this month’s question.<br /> </p><p>But I’ve had a win lately. After years of struggling to find time to write, especially since I returned to work full-time, I found a solution.<br /><br />1. I write in the mornings before work. I set the bar really low for myself. I try to get up a half hour earlier than normal. It's been working. I don’t write every day, but I write most days.<br /><br />2. For my morning writing sessions, I handwrite. I draft and brainstorm ideas in a notebook. I’m not sure what I’ll do when I’m finished with the rough draft and move on to editing, but I’m thinking about printing off my chapters and editing in longhand as well.<br /><br /> Why longhand? I find it hard to add any more computer time to my day. And I can write a couple pages long-hand in 15 minutes, but I’m not able to do that typing. I also find I feel more willing to experiment when I can cross something off. Typing is different. It feels permanent and harder for me to change—or take risks.<br /><br />3. On the weekends, I input whatever I wrote during the week into my computer. I do some light editing, but I’m not going crazy since it’s a rough draft.<br /><br />4. Another thing I’m trying, since I’ve set aside too many writing projects lately, is that I’m keeping this one a secret. I haven’t even talked to my family about it, which is unusual for me. I have learned that both criticism and praise can kill my momentum.<br /><br />5. I am gentle with myself. Some days I’m too tired to write. Some days the words just don’t come, and I write notes or read a book instead. That’s okay. The road to creating anything, especially writing, is never straight.<br /> </p><p>Aside from actually getting some writing done, a few of the fringe benefits:<br /><br />1. I’m happier. I have a job that’s a giving type job and a family. It’s easy for me to feel burnt out sometimes. But getting even 15 minutes to jot down part of a scene or some ideas makes me feel like I still have a life outside of being a teacher and a mom.<br /><br />2. No more excuses. I’d become really good at coming up with reasons for why I wasn't writing regularly. Now I feel so empowered. I can do this—even if it’s just a few pages at a time.<br /> </p><p><span> </span>Yes, I’m still battling insecurities. My feelings about this project go up and down from day to day or minute by minute. Like always.<br /><br /> But I finally feel like a real writer again. And that, my friends, is priceless.<br /><br /> What about you? How do you find time to write in your busy schedule (because we’re all juggling a million things)?</p><p><span style="background-color: yellow; font-size: small;"><span><span style="background-color: white;">If you'd like to read more ISWG posts or sign up, please go <a href="https://www.insecurewriterssupportgroup.com/p/iwsg-sign-up.html">HERE</a>. You won't be disappointed.</span></span></span> <br /></p><p style="text-align: center;"><span style="background-color: yellow; font-size: small;"><span><span style="background-color: white;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgAqli_HBNBHVLJDPuuHmrOk76sm-qNCr4kfMo78fT5VEFD5PSTH0w8fXZnBCvOyjj7jLT2xWpYtSLxUUJnj1sId9z9CaIWs_Lq6QgAf5KpH_lZ_8lGVArtMXcNcBbwzOAHgTpqg7ay2ZJgJC33ZifEaiVahoc9dIVsZqfYEx7i66CLX88HmpGHqR9OLA/s320/Insecure%20Writers%20Support%20Group%20Badge.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="315" data-original-width="320" height="315" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgAqli_HBNBHVLJDPuuHmrOk76sm-qNCr4kfMo78fT5VEFD5PSTH0w8fXZnBCvOyjj7jLT2xWpYtSLxUUJnj1sId9z9CaIWs_Lq6QgAf5KpH_lZ_8lGVArtMXcNcBbwzOAHgTpqg7ay2ZJgJC33ZifEaiVahoc9dIVsZqfYEx7i66CLX88HmpGHqR9OLA/s1600/Insecure%20Writers%20Support%20Group%20Badge.jpg" width="320" /></a></span></span></span> <br /></p><p><br /></p><p><br /></p><p></p>Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com17tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-8279674748669563592022-09-07T00:00:00.010-07:002022-09-07T00:00:00.200-07:00#ISWG: What Would You Never Not Ever Write?<p></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjUT-0f13FHIog4JBj6T6xl6unSxS6HHCg4ou_wavNGc21lltxKqAMFzzlUyLCHIL8jwQVSE2NLomm3GnsCTtEHYWdx3XE5_DwTe_FgmxsVWwRhMbJ5ca5nF6xzzTBg6KlbuIc9jL137a4GUtJ3woznwI01yZ4e5IwaWE_d8HK-9PNAQLI074sluvzvuA/s7952/nicola-nuttall-ObTfaF2hngw-unsplash.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="7952" data-original-width="5304" height="320" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjUT-0f13FHIog4JBj6T6xl6unSxS6HHCg4ou_wavNGc21lltxKqAMFzzlUyLCHIL8jwQVSE2NLomm3GnsCTtEHYWdx3XE5_DwTe_FgmxsVWwRhMbJ5ca5nF6xzzTBg6KlbuIc9jL137a4GUtJ3woznwI01yZ4e5IwaWE_d8HK-9PNAQLI074sluvzvuA/s320/nicola-nuttall-ObTfaF2hngw-unsplash.jpg" width="213" /></a></div><br /><p></p><h2 style="text-align: left;">September 7 question - What genre would be the worst one for you to tackle and why?</h2><p><br />At the beginning of my first writing class, the wonderful Meg Jensen asked, “What kind of books do you like to read?”<br /><br />I thought it was a bit of an off-topic question. Most people shared a genre that they liked: romance, sci-fi, mystery.<br /><br />I, a former English lit major, answered in my hoity-toity voice, “I like the classics.”<br /><br />“Well, that encompasses a lot of genres,” Meg said. “What kind of books do you really like?”<br /><br />I couldn’t give her a clear answer.<br /><br />Later she explained that she asked that question because we tend to know the genre we read the best. It tends to be the genre we write.<br /><br />What did that say about me? It’s not like I’m Dickens.<br /><br />I’ve thought about that question over the years and realized something. The reason I couldn’t answer is because I’m an eclectic reader. I read a lot of things, and not surprisingly, write in a lot of different genres.<br /><br />This fits my personality. I get bored easily and always like trying new things.<br /><br />This month’s question was hard to answer. What genre would be the worst one for me? I’m not sure. I’ve tried almost all of them, but I have to say, the one I least enjoyed was dystopian.<br /><br />I’ve never written a straight sci fi, though, and due to my lack of interest in outer space, maybe that’s another contender.<br /><br />Dystopian was just too depressing for me. It made me live in “worse case scenario” land. And after that experience, I decided something. I want to write books that give people hope. Not that dystopian cannot give people hope. It should, and often it does.<br /><br />Wading through the darkness in the middle was just too much for me.<br /><br />Is there a genre you would never write?</p><p> </p><p><span style="background-color: yellow; font-size: small;"><span><span style="background-color: white;">If you'd like to read more ISWG posts or sign up, please go <a href="https://www.insecurewriterssupportgroup.com/p/iwsg-sign-up.html">HERE</a>. You won't be disappointed.</span></span></span></p><p><span style="background-color: yellow; font-size: small;"><span><span style="background-color: white;"></span></span></span></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><span style="background-color: yellow; font-size: small;"><span><span style="background-color: white;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgAqli_HBNBHVLJDPuuHmrOk76sm-qNCr4kfMo78fT5VEFD5PSTH0w8fXZnBCvOyjj7jLT2xWpYtSLxUUJnj1sId9z9CaIWs_Lq6QgAf5KpH_lZ_8lGVArtMXcNcBbwzOAHgTpqg7ay2ZJgJC33ZifEaiVahoc9dIVsZqfYEx7i66CLX88HmpGHqR9OLA/s320/Insecure%20Writers%20Support%20Group%20Badge.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="315" data-original-width="320" height="315" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgAqli_HBNBHVLJDPuuHmrOk76sm-qNCr4kfMo78fT5VEFD5PSTH0w8fXZnBCvOyjj7jLT2xWpYtSLxUUJnj1sId9z9CaIWs_Lq6QgAf5KpH_lZ_8lGVArtMXcNcBbwzOAHgTpqg7ay2ZJgJC33ZifEaiVahoc9dIVsZqfYEx7i66CLX88HmpGHqR9OLA/s1600/Insecure%20Writers%20Support%20Group%20Badge.jpg" width="320" /></a></span></span></span></div>Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com7tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-62960831515757167932022-08-03T00:00:00.046-07:002022-08-03T00:00:00.205-07:00#ISWG: For Whom Do You Write?<div><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhI77Y3Xa3u5zUlp9vZ9YThOHZe4ZeGI1pnJoFj_q7BViyhb_5QC0T_esjHoWZjV9iS9ZqlgaI00XMcB896NtT2B4L-1fKNvv1XTOVWOeOeCxAFNZdhCkH9HWkfLE4cE9slq5JmioSc_YLR9748zZDIYvOvVl0K3R1C2LQVEe_fHthqvdO8cdRz7XERmw/s4104/houses-cheung-3rW1HAakg8g-unsplash.jpg" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="2736" data-original-width="4104" height="213" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhI77Y3Xa3u5zUlp9vZ9YThOHZe4ZeGI1pnJoFj_q7BViyhb_5QC0T_esjHoWZjV9iS9ZqlgaI00XMcB896NtT2B4L-1fKNvv1XTOVWOeOeCxAFNZdhCkH9HWkfLE4cE9slq5JmioSc_YLR9748zZDIYvOvVl0K3R1C2LQVEe_fHthqvdO8cdRz7XERmw/s320/houses-cheung-3rW1HAakg8g-unsplash.jpg" width="320" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><span class="rTNyH RZQOk">Photo by <a href="https://unsplash.com/@housescheung?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditCopyText">Houses Cheung</a> on <a href="https://unsplash.com/s/photos/auditorium?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditCopyText">Unsplash</a></span></td></tr></tbody></table><br /></div><p style="text-align: left;"></p><h2 style="text-align: left;">This month's question: When you set out to write a story, do you try to be more original or do you try to give readers what they want?</h2><p style="text-align: left;"><br />This month’s question got me thinking about how much I think about my audience when I write. I know the cardinal rule is to keep your audience in mind. But for better or worse, it really varies for me…<br /><br /><b>Middle Grade:</b> I tend to have a specific person in mind when I write, usually a student, one of my sons, or a child of a friend. The common denominator is this child is struggling to find books they want to read. Or sometimes I’m inspired by a gap I see in MG books. <br /><br /><b>YA: </b>These have generated the most enthusiasm from my adult critique partners. I usually start with an idea from my own life, so I feel like I’m writing more for myself, the book I would like to read. It's rare that I’m thinking of a specific teen…even though I'm pretty much surrounded by teens in real life.<br /><br /><b>Short stories:</b> These are my experimental works. I try things in short stories I’d never do in a novel. <a href="https://aaycor.org/paper-gardens">Like writing from the point of view of a book! </a><br /></p><p style="text-align: left;"><b>Nonfiction Articles:</b> I don’t write these much anymore, but I always wrote specifically for the publication, either off their wish list or theme list. But since I write for kids, I enjoyed the challenge of finding a way to explain an obscure historical tidbit in a kid-friendly way.</p><p style="text-align: left;"><b>PBs:</b> I'm just dipping my toes into this genre. Of course, I do have to please the reader, but I like the shorter form and word play involved. <br /><br />I don't think it has to be either or. There is originality even when you have a strict form. Think of the sonnet! (Something I have never attempted.) The wonderful thing about writing is that even when I’m writing for other people, my story will be original just because I am the one writing it. It will be colored with how I see the world. I’m always looking to get better at my craft and engage the reader more…but writing is also fun for me too. It's an adventure, no matter what I write.<br /><br />My answer: Both!<br /><br />How about you? Do you write to please the reader or yourself?<br /><br />*Just a note that I won’t be able to be online for much of Wednesday. I will probably be late in reading other people’s posts and returning blog visits. But know that I do treasure every comment, and reading your posts inspires me to keep going!<br /><br /></p><p><span style="background-color: yellow; font-size: small;"><span><span style="background-color: white;">If you'd like to read more ISWG posts or sign up, please go <a href="https://www.insecurewriterssupportgroup.com/p/iwsg-sign-up.html">HERE</a>. You won't be disappointed.</span></span></span></p><p><span style="background-color: yellow; font-size: small;"><span><span style="background-color: white;"></span></span></span></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><span style="background-color: yellow; font-size: small;"><span><span style="background-color: white;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgAqli_HBNBHVLJDPuuHmrOk76sm-qNCr4kfMo78fT5VEFD5PSTH0w8fXZnBCvOyjj7jLT2xWpYtSLxUUJnj1sId9z9CaIWs_Lq6QgAf5KpH_lZ_8lGVArtMXcNcBbwzOAHgTpqg7ay2ZJgJC33ZifEaiVahoc9dIVsZqfYEx7i66CLX88HmpGHqR9OLA/s320/Insecure%20Writers%20Support%20Group%20Badge.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="315" data-original-width="320" height="315" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgAqli_HBNBHVLJDPuuHmrOk76sm-qNCr4kfMo78fT5VEFD5PSTH0w8fXZnBCvOyjj7jLT2xWpYtSLxUUJnj1sId9z9CaIWs_Lq6QgAf5KpH_lZ_8lGVArtMXcNcBbwzOAHgTpqg7ay2ZJgJC33ZifEaiVahoc9dIVsZqfYEx7i66CLX88HmpGHqR9OLA/s1600/Insecure%20Writers%20Support%20Group%20Badge.jpg" width="320" /></a></span></span></span></div>Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com5tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-10443977595104341772022-07-06T00:00:00.003-07:002022-07-06T00:00:00.209-07:00#IWSG: Escaping to the World of Fiction<p> </p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhPIZPEb5nrq-M8SNvuwYkPeFsW4jbo0kIhwX2A9l253V1vL6C-ttYluOq8SvQxmTfRoyzu53jBf6jlLus20v8jIP_ys6w6tASyce86zb1xK5oB0Ny1dMlLjRJqoJSbmZ-QNercwI3B50FIn_3MOaDv3Vxq1IijpHjdH29JAu-Bbx3XH6GXlXq2Hocyhg/s6016/etienne-boulanger-C5yfbvMWxC8-unsplash.jpg" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="4016" data-original-width="6016" height="214" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhPIZPEb5nrq-M8SNvuwYkPeFsW4jbo0kIhwX2A9l253V1vL6C-ttYluOq8SvQxmTfRoyzu53jBf6jlLus20v8jIP_ys6w6tASyce86zb1xK5oB0Ny1dMlLjRJqoJSbmZ-QNercwI3B50FIn_3MOaDv3Vxq1IijpHjdH29JAu-Bbx3XH6GXlXq2Hocyhg/s320/etienne-boulanger-C5yfbvMWxC8-unsplash.jpg" width="320" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><span class="rTNyH RZQOk">Photo by <a href="https://unsplash.com/@etienneblg?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditCopyText">Etienne Boulanger</a> on <a href="https://unsplash.com/s/photos/escape?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditCopyText">Unsplash</a></span></td></tr></tbody></table><br /><p></p><p>When I was a little, I used to ask my mom repeatedly (as young children tend to do!) if we’d ever go back to living like they did in the “Little House” books. I imagined with glee the thought of electricity disappearing, growing all our own food, and cooking over a fire. I even liked to pretend our wood stove was the stove in Laura’s log cabin. Alas it never happened, and now, all grown up, I couldn’t do without electricity, thank you very much.</p><p></p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgb8EfcL-cC5FZsOrasHVCSTwKBg4AC9YAoUHOxYYU-ZC3AUZPf9rCxK3JBCd-_12kQSuUyynWZIV8JX9dCtdjj2d3fa6qxCHxBErfyGr_70U6kqMIo1SA2QfJOwUDrd7HjCijURW3zRRzrHndGZiqI1uFOvLbAwZnJarI1R4r68FP3jXiQPi9srv_GqA/s2849/IMG_20220622_173232954.jpg" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="2468" data-original-width="2849" height="173" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgb8EfcL-cC5FZsOrasHVCSTwKBg4AC9YAoUHOxYYU-ZC3AUZPf9rCxK3JBCd-_12kQSuUyynWZIV8JX9dCtdjj2d3fa6qxCHxBErfyGr_70U6kqMIo1SA2QfJOwUDrd7HjCijURW3zRRzrHndGZiqI1uFOvLbAwZnJarI1R4r68FP3jXiQPi9srv_GqA/w200-h173/IMG_20220622_173232954.jpg" width="200" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;">Me at 8, reading with my Grammie and longing for life in Little House land<br /></td></tr></tbody></table><p><br /><br />But I still long for simpler times. Of course, the world in books is often a glorified rendition of another age, the hard parts smoothed over, but these are the books that I long to live in:</p><h2 style="text-align: left;"><b>Anne of Green Gables</b></h2><p> </p><p></p><br /><br /><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgwpzYywqjIG4cuPwMK13Xe46MsqLl_tZWrl9PGdJxPXeuoAWK-Lcai7_Hj3cOcEvNvMSy8tRRPlr5pkIDkEx2j41l3tyDaW9Sk-ZPiaxAFyqSNLMTvatOD6uFkjynOmt0EWQ0UemQPeLVytDi6atySnnZqjHvk1Uz0uC4upd05T_n7Mb-pu-X6J5VXBw/s711/anneofgreen.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="711" data-original-width="474" height="200" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgwpzYywqjIG4cuPwMK13Xe46MsqLl_tZWrl9PGdJxPXeuoAWK-Lcai7_Hj3cOcEvNvMSy8tRRPlr5pkIDkEx2j41l3tyDaW9Sk-ZPiaxAFyqSNLMTvatOD6uFkjynOmt0EWQ0UemQPeLVytDi6atySnnZqjHvk1Uz0uC4upd05T_n7Mb-pu-X6J5VXBw/w133-h200/anneofgreen.jpg" width="133" /></a></div><p><br /><br /></p><h2 style="text-align: left;"></h2><p>I can identify with Anne, because I flub big words and idioms just as much--and she's a writer too. My childhood was much like hers: playing pretend in the abandoned lots and creek near our house. I have a childhood friend, like Diana, who is like a sister, even though she lives too far away for me to see her often. Maybe I’m not longing for the world of the book, but to continue that carefree world of my childhood.</p><p></p><h2 style="text-align: left;"><b>Jane Austen</b></h2><p><br /><b> <br /></b></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><b><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiR4CpjaYD-QLADciFTsNgd-uqafNp4WICFn-q0uWkeKjzQKfCK8q-ueLm52raoufvIr33X1Xxq3n6kQu3wGGAI2m231mkn6M8_hiihkJWAfCf74wQGFg29hokeOkvLVAD5KyxUW5AHAgd9WdlJGL_cVmgDhDMfS99lt-RMUvI1b0ZF6B0eFuuUn9Ya1g/s650/jane.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="650" data-original-width="474" height="200" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiR4CpjaYD-QLADciFTsNgd-uqafNp4WICFn-q0uWkeKjzQKfCK8q-ueLm52raoufvIr33X1Xxq3n6kQu3wGGAI2m231mkn6M8_hiihkJWAfCf74wQGFg29hokeOkvLVAD5KyxUW5AHAgd9WdlJGL_cVmgDhDMfS99lt-RMUvI1b0ZF6B0eFuuUn9Ya1g/w146-h200/jane.jpg" width="146" /></a></b></div><b><br /></b><p></p><h2 style="text-align: left;"><br /></h2><p>I love this world because of the manners. I like how the characters don’t engage in TMI, and there’s a challenge to figure out about what people are saying behind their words. And people are always spending time together: house parties, balls, and teas. Unlike the Bennetts, we probably dine with less than four-and-twenty families.😀 But I still I long for a time when seeing people in person is more common than social media.<br /></p><p> </p><h2 style="text-align: left;"><a href="https://moosepath.com/van.htm"><b>Moosepath League novels</b></a></h2><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjMtjgTWG4d_v9UmNx4LVjdtD-tPgKGl95ZdJ7ScPD4o5xftdLC81mlA-SpWxf_jnfozkN-EtDOKMqgxXdiro6E1QxuTo0gMBTdq_c9ad6U7xf9aq2RYe69dvAnzTIW22oeSWTiWA7HZvyoy03mXubK8GGKzyoNpk3kB7gsA412ctjnlwcOWCvVEHy8Fw/s200/cordelia.jpg" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="200" data-original-width="128" height="200" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjMtjgTWG4d_v9UmNx4LVjdtD-tPgKGl95ZdJ7ScPD4o5xftdLC81mlA-SpWxf_jnfozkN-EtDOKMqgxXdiro6E1QxuTo0gMBTdq_c9ad6U7xf9aq2RYe69dvAnzTIW22oeSWTiWA7HZvyoy03mXubK8GGKzyoNpk3kB7gsA412ctjnlwcOWCvVEHy8Fw/w128-h200/cordelia.jpg" width="128" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><br /></td></tr></tbody></table><h2 style="text-align: left;"></h2><p>I recently discovered this wonderful series set in Maine in the 1890s. Imagine a cross between P.G.Wodehouse, Garrison Keiller, and Dickens. There is always tons of word play (Sundry Moss and Capital Gaines are names of characters) and high jinx. The Moosepath league members are kind to a fault, eager for adventure, and willing to help others. In the afterward, the author says he bases his characters on people he knows. It's nice to know that people like the Moosepath League still exist today. Perhaps I just need to look harder to find the good in others or aspire to be more like the Moosepath League myself.<br /></p><p><br />As I look over this list, I am reminded of one of my goals as a writer: to write books that I want to read. </p><h2 style="text-align: left;">I want to create a world where readers want to live. </h2><p>And as we’ve had more than our fair share of darkness in the last few years, I would like to be more like Van Reid of the Moosepath League and remind readers of what is good and true.</p><h2 style="text-align: left;">What fictional world would you like to live in? If you're a writer, how does that impact your writing?</h2><p></p><p><span style="background-color: yellow; font-size: small;"><span><span style="background-color: white;">If you'd like to read more ISWG posts or sign up, please go <a href="https://www.insecurewriterssupportgroup.com/p/iwsg-sign-up.html">HERE</a>. You won't be disappointed.</span></span></span></p><p><span style="background-color: yellow; font-size: small;"><span><span style="background-color: white;"></span></span></span></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><span style="background-color: yellow; font-size: small;"><span><span style="background-color: white;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgAqli_HBNBHVLJDPuuHmrOk76sm-qNCr4kfMo78fT5VEFD5PSTH0w8fXZnBCvOyjj7jLT2xWpYtSLxUUJnj1sId9z9CaIWs_Lq6QgAf5KpH_lZ_8lGVArtMXcNcBbwzOAHgTpqg7ay2ZJgJC33ZifEaiVahoc9dIVsZqfYEx7i66CLX88HmpGHqR9OLA/s320/Insecure%20Writers%20Support%20Group%20Badge.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="315" data-original-width="320" height="315" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgAqli_HBNBHVLJDPuuHmrOk76sm-qNCr4kfMo78fT5VEFD5PSTH0w8fXZnBCvOyjj7jLT2xWpYtSLxUUJnj1sId9z9CaIWs_Lq6QgAf5KpH_lZ_8lGVArtMXcNcBbwzOAHgTpqg7ay2ZJgJC33ZifEaiVahoc9dIVsZqfYEx7i66CLX88HmpGHqR9OLA/s1600/Insecure%20Writers%20Support%20Group%20Badge.jpg" width="320" /></a></span></span></span></div><p><br /><br /></p><br /><br /><p></p><p></p><br /><br />Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com25tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-57630043637551543192022-06-01T00:00:00.004-07:002022-07-04T10:45:04.093-07:00 When Writing Gets Tough, Write Differently<table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgHLVEeBsUCTwA4SsWZi6K1NP-0JOsOpvuVwjqGeuhZGMQgEni_d1xoXczUVNGIxYMQ1amqLaxQ5gUT-9YCS5m1tG5e7bCp9ac-btRjbUZPQsUjptu-bLD7iWfCr6iFP7yQHbL8gr2u0vCgNOx3QcGUqprjGPOXmEyjqtNC5druHLZmTqL5G5Yrz7q2qA/s3872/aubrey-odom-mabey-T1L9Q5g7eIQ-unsplash.jpg" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="2592" data-original-width="3872" height="214" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgHLVEeBsUCTwA4SsWZi6K1NP-0JOsOpvuVwjqGeuhZGMQgEni_d1xoXczUVNGIxYMQ1amqLaxQ5gUT-9YCS5m1tG5e7bCp9ac-btRjbUZPQsUjptu-bLD7iWfCr6iFP7yQHbL8gr2u0vCgNOx3QcGUqprjGPOXmEyjqtNC5druHLZmTqL5G5Yrz7q2qA/s320/aubrey-odom-mabey-T1L9Q5g7eIQ-unsplash.jpg" width="320" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><span style="font-size: x-small;">Sometimes it takes a village to get a writer unstuck!<br /></span></td></tr></tbody></table><br /><p>Many years ago I attended an education workshop, <i>Don’t Try Harder, Try Differently</i>. What a great title! Although it may have been intended for teachers, it applies to writers too. Don’t keep doing the thing that doesn’t work! <br /><br />It used to be when I got stuck, I would just try harder.<br /><br />This chapter or scene isn’t working? <b>Just write the next one.</b><br /><br />Keep getting rejections? J<b>ust send out more queries</b>.<br /><br />The novel isn’t working. My critique partners hate it, and maybe I hate it too. <b>Just finish it.</b><br /><br />But none of these things worked all that well. <br /><br /></p><h2 style="text-align: left;">What has worked:</h2><p><br />1. <b>Accepting limits.</b> Very few writers have the luxury to just write. Most of us are juggling work and family obligations. Recently, I’ve lowered my expectations for myself to writing one chapter every 1-2 weeks. I may be able to accomplish more in the summer when I’m not teaching. But I’ve also been exploring shorter types of writing: picture books, short stories. There’s something about taking the pressure off that makes me more creative. <br /><br />2. <b>Take a break.</b> It used to be when I hit a tough spot in my writing, I’d just press through. But I ended up with a whole mess of a novel. Now I see there’s always a reason for getting stuck. Sometimes it’s a plot hole or character acting out of character. It’s better to stop and regroup before I barrel through the end.<br /><br />3. <b>Write outside your normal genre or write something just for fun</b>. If I’m stuck with a novel draft, it helps to focus on shorter works, blogging, or maybe just writing in response to a prompt. (I’ve published two short stories from writing prompts!) It gives me a quick win. Poetry and journal writing are also good outlets.<br /><br />4. <b>Read!</b> When none of the above works, I read for fun. Sometimes a story will inspire me to go back to the project I’m struggling with. Sometimes it just reminds me why I write: to create for others the wonderful experiences I’ve had while immersed in a book.<br /><br />5. <b> Community!</b> I’m an introvert, and I don’t like group projects! But I have found that I really need other writers to keep me writing. Whether it’s swapping chapters over coffee, attending SCBWI webinars, or connecting with the #ISWG group each month, I need that outside accountability and inspiration to keep me going in the trenches. <br /><br />How do you deal with the rough patches with your writing?</p><p>Photo credit: <a href="Photo by <a href="https://unsplash.com/@octoberroses?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditCopyText">Aubrey Odom-Mabey</a> on <a href="https://unsplash.com/s/photos/stuck?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditCopyText">Unsplash</a>">Aubrey Odom-Mabey, Unsplash</a></p><p><span style="background-color: yellow; font-size: small;"><span><span style="background-color: white;">If you'd like to read more ISWG posts or sign up, please go <a href="https://www.insecurewriterssupportgroup.com/p/iwsg-sign-up.html">HERE</a>. You won't be disappointed.</span></span></span></p><p><span style="background-color: yellow; font-size: small;"><span><span style="background-color: white;"></span></span></span></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><span style="background-color: yellow; font-size: small;"><span><span style="background-color: white;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgAqli_HBNBHVLJDPuuHmrOk76sm-qNCr4kfMo78fT5VEFD5PSTH0w8fXZnBCvOyjj7jLT2xWpYtSLxUUJnj1sId9z9CaIWs_Lq6QgAf5KpH_lZ_8lGVArtMXcNcBbwzOAHgTpqg7ay2ZJgJC33ZifEaiVahoc9dIVsZqfYEx7i66CLX88HmpGHqR9OLA/s320/Insecure%20Writers%20Support%20Group%20Badge.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="315" data-original-width="320" height="315" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgAqli_HBNBHVLJDPuuHmrOk76sm-qNCr4kfMo78fT5VEFD5PSTH0w8fXZnBCvOyjj7jLT2xWpYtSLxUUJnj1sId9z9CaIWs_Lq6QgAf5KpH_lZ_8lGVArtMXcNcBbwzOAHgTpqg7ay2ZJgJC33ZifEaiVahoc9dIVsZqfYEx7i66CLX88HmpGHqR9OLA/s1600/Insecure%20Writers%20Support%20Group%20Badge.jpg" width="320" /></a></span></span></span></div><span style="background-color: yellow; font-size: small;"><span><span style="background-color: white;"><br /> </span></span></span> <br /> <br /><p></p><p> </p>Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com7tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-91834882362659781672022-05-04T00:00:00.015-07:002022-05-30T12:55:06.994-07:00#IWSG: Writing Highs and Lows<p> </p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEibyODG6LdAl-KqpB6d5aoBa9bMtRR88cgBwSVYvTwkpeinuaAAxpn4rCrK2HjX_kIXAVHmCNxlqw2a6GmJ2Ip583XqZk5n48HXPU2xDzy3newSCVtPAxHOC8eU7BH-5fZx5JSfExVhSHKLYZfJ06abJeWs7pq1JPP8SpiciJD46xX4uNdRFbnPXwkcZw/s1025/Classic_Quotes_1-50_43.jpg" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="769" data-original-width="1025" height="240" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEibyODG6LdAl-KqpB6d5aoBa9bMtRR88cgBwSVYvTwkpeinuaAAxpn4rCrK2HjX_kIXAVHmCNxlqw2a6GmJ2Ip583XqZk5n48HXPU2xDzy3newSCVtPAxHOC8eU7BH-5fZx5JSfExVhSHKLYZfJ06abJeWs7pq1JPP8SpiciJD46xX4uNdRFbnPXwkcZw/s320/Classic_Quotes_1-50_43.jpg" width="320" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><span style="font-size: xx-small;">From https://www.chelsey.co.nz/quotes/classic-quotes/it-was-the-best-of-times-it-was-the-worst-of-times-charles-dickens-1859</span><br /></td></tr></tbody></table><br /><p></p><div style="text-align: left;">This month's question this month is a good one.</div><div style="text-align: left;">It's the best of times; it's the worst of times.</div><div style="text-align: left;">What are your writer highs?</div><div style="text-align: left;">And what are your writer lows?</div><div style="text-align: left;"><br /><h2 style="text-align: left;">Highs:</h2></div><p style="text-align: left;"> 1. Seeing my words in print</p><p style="text-align: left;"> 2. Patching a plot hole—those nasty little beasts!</p><p style="text-align: left;"> 3. Finding the “just right” word</p><p style="text-align: left;"> 4. The people I’ve met along the way. <span style="font-weight: normal;">Kindred spirits (a.k.a other writers) are not as scarce as I used to think. (as Anne herself says)</span></p><p style="text-align: left;"><span style="font-weight: normal;"> </span>5. New ideas, a.k.a. <a href="https://jennienzor.blogspot.com/2020/12/iswg-its-most-wonderful-time-of-year-to.html">“The Shiny New Manuscript” syndrome</a></p><p style="text-align: left;"><a href="https://jennienzor.blogspot.com/2020/12/iswg-its-most-wonderful-time-of-year-to.html"><br /></a><br /></p><p style="text-align: left;"></p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjfnABSirrOoSv1BrkWeAjZ3PPmZ0MFuMfnYwAetdtjJZ0mrbH90tKGdTOLfiRO-ECD1SCkZ3T0hmsxh4r7jQ7oRsc5jQ3Pe1CNGstD8E8UPxW4wW6OO2kO_oIGKBRY9gMRjARMn38oGiDGz0Sld0X5yrP1RuxqaMlZ2iNBfTDT6LwFigHXGa8XLgwIEQ/s448/IMAG1584.jpg" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="448" data-original-width="268" height="200" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjfnABSirrOoSv1BrkWeAjZ3PPmZ0MFuMfnYwAetdtjJZ0mrbH90tKGdTOLfiRO-ECD1SCkZ3T0hmsxh4r7jQ7oRsc5jQ3Pe1CNGstD8E8UPxW4wW6OO2kO_oIGKBRY9gMRjARMn38oGiDGz0Sld0X5yrP1RuxqaMlZ2iNBfTDT6LwFigHXGa8XLgwIEQ/w119-h200/IMAG1584.jpg" width="119" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><span style="font-size: xx-small;">It's sparkly! It's new! Look a shiny new manuscript!<br /></span></td></tr></tbody></table><p></p><h2 style="text-align: left;">Lows:</h2><p style="text-align: left;"><br />1. <a href="https://jennienzor.blogspot.com/search?q=critique+sandwich">Rejections or harsh critiques</a></p><p style="text-align: left;">2. People who look at me like I have three heads when I tell them I’m a writer.</p><p style="text-align: left;">3. Pounding on the keys even when I don’t feel like it.</p><p style="text-align: left;">4. Writer’s block/getting stuck--<span style="font-weight: normal;">Even though I've overcome several spells of writer's block, it's hard not to get discouraged.</span></p><p style="text-align: left;">5. Condescending editors/agents--<span style="font-weight: normal;">I understand their job is hard, but making fun of authors, especially in public, is not professional. </span></p><h2><br />What about you? What are your writing highs and lows?</h2><p style="text-align: left;"><span style="background-color: yellow; font-size: small;"><span><span style="background-color: white;">If you'd like to read more ISWG posts or sign up, please go <a href="https://www.insecurewriterssupportgroup.com/p/iwsg-sign-up.html">HERE</a>. You won't be disappointed. <br /></span></span></span></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/a/AVvXsEi2qPh-4ZS7Do3RlZK2trPtsUuWLmnu_gUwXVnV7QyGudTNnQ_ykwms1M2Phw4VkJPDYy5QHXrVRAgo-eax6lBAgvlX3mPhTiki39SXeMkm0iKd_idQUN4But8un2BLAiYrbtvUmBZI1ctJv93WH3WpcPhzMEMDaKYFkUjC6VB7XV_n8-6-OMeHG36KvQ=s320" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="315" data-original-width="320" height="315" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/a/AVvXsEi2qPh-4ZS7Do3RlZK2trPtsUuWLmnu_gUwXVnV7QyGudTNnQ_ykwms1M2Phw4VkJPDYy5QHXrVRAgo-eax6lBAgvlX3mPhTiki39SXeMkm0iKd_idQUN4But8un2BLAiYrbtvUmBZI1ctJv93WH3WpcPhzMEMDaKYFkUjC6VB7XV_n8-6-OMeHG36KvQ" width="320" /></a></div><h2> </h2><h2><br /><br /></h2>Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com4tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-15128710788438010722022-04-06T00:00:00.042-07:002022-04-06T00:00:00.206-07:00#ISWG: Losing that Loving Feeling<table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhCPTu5JDY8PhBJlshWQ3guXJgBtgOF48Mdw-IJq0JqItwz0eqkwEnzSbRoh4yToGkeSdqsha7UCD2Iol4OKvh8p-i47c8s8ewpn4pbyZIZCl1YP-Yii3RQWTxeG-3pm_MppNApgEcSVtQMg-_eptRxRD_F4Uwi1H2MoMo2qEXNkleiNepphS1QMFSHbw/s5184/brett-jordan-_8cmfRrtVas-unsplash.jpg" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="3888" data-original-width="5184" height="240" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhCPTu5JDY8PhBJlshWQ3guXJgBtgOF48Mdw-IJq0JqItwz0eqkwEnzSbRoh4yToGkeSdqsha7UCD2Iol4OKvh8p-i47c8s8ewpn4pbyZIZCl1YP-Yii3RQWTxeG-3pm_MppNApgEcSVtQMg-_eptRxRD_F4Uwi1H2MoMo2qEXNkleiNepphS1QMFSHbw/s320/brett-jordan-_8cmfRrtVas-unsplash.jpg" width="320" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><span style="font-size: x-small;"><span class="rTNyH RZQOk">Photo by <a href="https://unsplash.com/@brett_jordan?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditCopyText">Brett Jordan</a> on <a href="https://unsplash.com/s/photos/give-up?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditCopyText">Unsplash</a></span></span></td></tr></tbody></table><br /><p>Growing up, it was instilled in me very strongly to never quit. And that life skill has stood me in good stead through a lot of things, especially work situations. But it took me well into my adulthood before I realized that sometimes it’s okay to quit. Sometimes a hobby’s not for you or you grow apart from a friend, and it’s okay to let that go. (Like those socks I tried to knit. I should probably accept that I will never finish them!)<br /><br />It’s still hard for me to decide when to set aside a manuscript.<br /><br />I have written several complete manuscripts. I have queried four of them to various ranges of success. I have two that I decided to abandon before I even got to the querying stage. And now, I have one I’ve been working on it for a year, but I have lost all my excitement for it.<br /><br />In <a href="https://jennienzor.blogspot.com/2022/03/iswg-trying-new-things.html">last month’s post</a>, I talked about being versatile. But the thing about trying lots of new things is that in the process, sometimes you realize what you don’t like. <br /><br />And maybe this genre, which tends to be dark, is just not me. I look longingly at old manuscripts and think about how this or that genre made me happier--somehow forgetting that there are no easy books to write.</p><p>But if I set it aside, there's that nagging fear that I’m a quitter. I should just push through the boredom. Because I can’t give up. I can’t not finish. Aw! Will the insecurities ever stop?<br /><br />Reasons why to set this manuscript aside:<br /><br />1. It’s dark and depressing, and I don’t need any more of that in my life right now.<br /><br />2. It might not be marketable. It’s in an over-saturated genre.<br /><br />3. I’ve lost my passion and excitement about working on it.<br /></p><p>What to do? Although when I initially wrote this post, I was ready to set it aside for now or perhaps forever, I have decided to continue. It's helped to take baby steps. I don't think about finishing the whole book, just the next scene or chapter.</p><p></p><p>Have you ever taken a break or set aside a manuscript?</p><p>In other news, I found out that my short story for adults, "The Complete Jane Austen on a Desert Island" will be published in a local anthology in May. <br /></p><p style="text-align: left;"><span style="background-color: yellow; font-size: small;"><span><span style="background-color: white;">If you'd like to read more ISWG posts or sign up, please go <a href="https://www.insecurewriterssupportgroup.com/p/iwsg-sign-up.html">HERE</a>. You won't be disappointed. <br /></span></span></span></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/a/AVvXsEi2qPh-4ZS7Do3RlZK2trPtsUuWLmnu_gUwXVnV7QyGudTNnQ_ykwms1M2Phw4VkJPDYy5QHXrVRAgo-eax6lBAgvlX3mPhTiki39SXeMkm0iKd_idQUN4But8un2BLAiYrbtvUmBZI1ctJv93WH3WpcPhzMEMDaKYFkUjC6VB7XV_n8-6-OMeHG36KvQ=s320" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="315" data-original-width="320" height="315" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/a/AVvXsEi2qPh-4ZS7Do3RlZK2trPtsUuWLmnu_gUwXVnV7QyGudTNnQ_ykwms1M2Phw4VkJPDYy5QHXrVRAgo-eax6lBAgvlX3mPhTiki39SXeMkm0iKd_idQUN4But8un2BLAiYrbtvUmBZI1ctJv93WH3WpcPhzMEMDaKYFkUjC6VB7XV_n8-6-OMeHG36KvQ" width="320" /></a></div><p> </p>Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com4tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-11612152221349960642022-03-02T17:31:00.006-08:002022-03-02T17:31:00.226-08:00ISWG: Trying New Things<p></p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/a/AVvXsEgTnvexqxzE7o5UIZIH7L2C7Qy4SjKA628x5miun5oepNumtmDN3s3-eXOjvT6Shn1DdA3wJ6qv0lIwXmIA6f3sT4bnIsL1yCJLYdyWFjBxR4Mag3PkUNYb4FQmdL1482HV2nRKeK77Umna2ocEBJ0UY4mx6REgnTeHmn6dibIn2Kou6sAtPCWdh0ZE0g=s4032" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="4032" data-original-width="3024" height="320" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/a/AVvXsEgTnvexqxzE7o5UIZIH7L2C7Qy4SjKA628x5miun5oepNumtmDN3s3-eXOjvT6Shn1DdA3wJ6qv0lIwXmIA6f3sT4bnIsL1yCJLYdyWFjBxR4Mag3PkUNYb4FQmdL1482HV2nRKeK77Umna2ocEBJ0UY4mx6REgnTeHmn6dibIn2Kou6sAtPCWdh0ZE0g=s320" width="240" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;">Photo by <a href="https://unsplash.com/@aesullivan2010?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditCopyText">Anna Sullivan</a> on <a href="https://unsplash.com/s/photos/menu?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditCopyText">Unsplash</a>
</td></tr></tbody></table><br />My husband and I have a running joke about what he orders when we go out to eat. I always try something new. He always orders the same thing—no matter the restaurant. He says, “At least I won’t be disappointed.”<br /><br />To tell the truth, I’ve had some ups and downs with my orders—and with my writing. I like to try new things, whether it’s in food or in life. <br /><br />To date, although I generally write for children and teens, I have tried nearly every genre within that age range (mystery, fantasy, historical, contemporary, etc.). I have written nonfiction and fiction. I have written short stories and novels.<br /><br />Recently, I tried my hand at something outside my comfort zone. I wrote a short story for adults with a very unusual POV. It is also a little more humorous than what I normally write.<br /><br />My critique partner said, “I can’t believe you wrote this.”<br /><br />Of course, when you’re an insecure writer, you can even obsess about a compliment. So of course, I started wondering, why do I write all over the place? Why can’t I stick with one genre? I see all this marketing advice about building your brand, being known as the writer who writes X, Y, or Z. Well, I’ll never be able to do that.<br /><br />My husband came to the rescue: “Think about it this way: you’re versatile.”<br /><br />Have I been scared to write a scene or a story? Honestly, I’m scared to write just about everything I write. It’s different. People won’t like me if I write this. I don’t know enough about X. And more recently, with the YA project I’m working on, strangely enough, some of what I’ve written has come true. Does that happen to other scifi/futuristic writers? Have to say I’m new to that genre too.<br /><br />But we have to keep writing. Like trying a different item on the menu at each restaurant, I can’t say that everything I write works out. But I always learn something from every experience.<br /><br />And that’s what matters, right?<p></p><p style="text-align: left;"><span style="background-color: yellow; font-size: small;"><span><b><span style="background-color: white;">Have you ever been conflicted about writing a story
or adding a scene to a story? How did you decide to write it or not? </span></b></span></span></p><p style="text-align: left;"><span style="background-color: yellow; font-size: small;"><span><span style="background-color: white;">If you'd like to read more ISWG posts or sign up, please go <a href="https://www.insecurewriterssupportgroup.com/p/iwsg-sign-up.html">HERE</a>. You won't be disappointed. <br /></span></span></span></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/a/AVvXsEi2qPh-4ZS7Do3RlZK2trPtsUuWLmnu_gUwXVnV7QyGudTNnQ_ykwms1M2Phw4VkJPDYy5QHXrVRAgo-eax6lBAgvlX3mPhTiki39SXeMkm0iKd_idQUN4But8un2BLAiYrbtvUmBZI1ctJv93WH3WpcPhzMEMDaKYFkUjC6VB7XV_n8-6-OMeHG36KvQ=s320" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="315" data-original-width="320" height="315" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/a/AVvXsEi2qPh-4ZS7Do3RlZK2trPtsUuWLmnu_gUwXVnV7QyGudTNnQ_ykwms1M2Phw4VkJPDYy5QHXrVRAgo-eax6lBAgvlX3mPhTiki39SXeMkm0iKd_idQUN4But8un2BLAiYrbtvUmBZI1ctJv93WH3WpcPhzMEMDaKYFkUjC6VB7XV_n8-6-OMeHG36KvQ" width="320" /></a></div><br /><p style="text-align: left;"><br /><br /></p><p><span style="background-color: yellow;"><span style="font-size: large;"><b><span style="background-color: white;"> </span></b></span></span></p><p> </p>Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com3tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-33563453653571098592022-02-02T00:00:00.011-08:002022-02-02T08:21:14.821-08:00IWSG: Slow Writers Unite!<p> </p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/a/AVvXsEjMb3noEOWvYC_4snzJbsfY300qdiTYvFCUzCSndcI7o00TD6Z4VDAUaJE5w6UYbHW5Bw05haKTEOQCZXzEFsJ6Uj-qAmAB94rX3TjDTXfI9NEvohGnvQ_NkAM3AskJjlGa06dImqz6mKex64pVNLoA6MlODkgnSoy8F_l1bAASrJ_letnkxs9_TewM-w=s3946" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="2618" data-original-width="3946" height="212" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/a/AVvXsEjMb3noEOWvYC_4snzJbsfY300qdiTYvFCUzCSndcI7o00TD6Z4VDAUaJE5w6UYbHW5Bw05haKTEOQCZXzEFsJ6Uj-qAmAB94rX3TjDTXfI9NEvohGnvQ_NkAM3AskJjlGa06dImqz6mKex64pVNLoA6MlODkgnSoy8F_l1bAASrJ_letnkxs9_TewM-w=s320" width="320" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><span style="font-size: xx-small;">https://unsplash.com/photos/FTKfX3xZIcc?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditShareLink</span></td></tr></tbody></table><br /><p></p><p>There's the <a href="https://www.slowfood.com/">slow food movement.</a></p><p>And a <a href="https://slowparentingmovement.wordpress.com/welcome-to-slow-parenting/">slow parenting movement</a>, which I've been following without knowing it. </p><p></p><p>And although I found some posts about Slow Writing Movements, most seemed to be geared towards literary fiction writers, which I am not.</p><p>But what if we started our own movement? A movement where it was okay not to be the fastest writer in the room.<br /></p><h2 style="text-align: left;">Slow writing would be a place where...<br /></h2><p style="text-align: left;">It’s okay not to fast draft or do NaNoWrMo. </p><p style="text-align: left;">Daily tallies of word counts doesn't make you a better writer. <br /><br />Some days you might write a lot, others a little. It’s all adds up.<br /><br />Quality over quantity.<br /><br />It’s okay to stop mid-draft to look up the right phrase or research your setting—your writing will be richer for it.<br /><br />This is not a race. If you write faster than others, you will not sell your book faster or gain more readers.<br /><br />Take time to smell the roses, to live life, because fiction is made of life.<br /><br />Make sure to take time away from writing—fresh eyes make the best editors.<br /><br />Or if you want to make your first draft take even longer, just say yes to more backstory, maps, world building, and character charts. 😀<br /><br /></p><h2 style="text-align: left;">Will you join me?</h2><p style="text-align: left;">I didn't do this month's question. I thankfully have not lost any of my writing heroes yet. And I didn't want to do a sad post. If you'd like to read more ISWG posts or sign up, please go <a href="https://www.insecurewriterssupportgroup.com/p/iwsg-sign-up.html">HERE</a>. You won't be disappointed. </p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/a/AVvXsEi2qPh-4ZS7Do3RlZK2trPtsUuWLmnu_gUwXVnV7QyGudTNnQ_ykwms1M2Phw4VkJPDYy5QHXrVRAgo-eax6lBAgvlX3mPhTiki39SXeMkm0iKd_idQUN4But8un2BLAiYrbtvUmBZI1ctJv93WH3WpcPhzMEMDaKYFkUjC6VB7XV_n8-6-OMeHG36KvQ=s320" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="315" data-original-width="320" height="315" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/a/AVvXsEi2qPh-4ZS7Do3RlZK2trPtsUuWLmnu_gUwXVnV7QyGudTNnQ_ykwms1M2Phw4VkJPDYy5QHXrVRAgo-eax6lBAgvlX3mPhTiki39SXeMkm0iKd_idQUN4But8un2BLAiYrbtvUmBZI1ctJv93WH3WpcPhzMEMDaKYFkUjC6VB7XV_n8-6-OMeHG36KvQ" width="320" /></a></div><br /><p style="text-align: left;"><br /></p><h2 style="text-align: left;"> </h2>Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com16tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-48606264671317776772022-01-05T00:00:00.015-08:002022-01-05T00:00:00.209-08:00ISWG: When I thought Writing was a Contest<table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/a/AVvXsEgHyBl9G7lGgmnVNuLpyqzccln-2OoxDLVLjIT0SQD-ZGymMBixpOyK2zlbZoumF_OxIQJpm8EKPN65yBs7lFGiyZxrT8B6cYsvN9KuzHcsIuA0RRvW-lqo5rOHaGlxNP93YEMu6vbw4Yr3IwosaAHNX6IcSAd94zzwnQkPVh6-INxDQCCBX0f1MdVWTA=s3500" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="2333" data-original-width="3500" height="213" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/a/AVvXsEgHyBl9G7lGgmnVNuLpyqzccln-2OoxDLVLjIT0SQD-ZGymMBixpOyK2zlbZoumF_OxIQJpm8EKPN65yBs7lFGiyZxrT8B6cYsvN9KuzHcsIuA0RRvW-lqo5rOHaGlxNP93YEMu6vbw4Yr3IwosaAHNX6IcSAd94zzwnQkPVh6-INxDQCCBX0f1MdVWTA=s320" width="320" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;">Photo by <a href="https://unsplash.com/@markusspiske?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditCopyText">Markus Spiske</a> on <a href="https://unsplash.com/s/photos/contest?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditCopyText">Unsplash</a>
</td></tr></tbody></table><br /><p><br />It was the best of times, it was the worst of times attending my first conference. My second son was only 6 months old and not used to me being gone. Let’s just say my mom and husband deserve a medal keeping him occupied for that day. <br /><br />I wore my “Writer” conference badge like a medal. I even walked taller when I went to get gas. <br /><br />And then there were the pitch sessions. Every single agent/editor made a request. I got to meet the illustrious Andrea Brown in person.<br /><br />I felt like I was at an American Idol audition and got the golden ticket!<br /><br />But the bad news was I only had a really polished first chapter, although the rest of the manuscript was complete. I only had to show a first chapter in my pitch sessions. They didn’t see the rest of it. The saggy middle, the ending that needed tons of work, my thousands upon thousands of newbie mistakes.<br /><br />I had a writing mentor at the time. She’d read the full and was working with me on revisions. She graciously read it more than once. And after the third time told me that it still wasn’t ready.<br /><br />But. I. Had. Been. Chosen. </p><p>No one could've talk me back from the ledge of my dream as I was just about to take flight.<br /><br />So I sent it out anyway.<br /><br />It was a few months before the first rejection came in. Still, surprisingly that editor had a few good things to say.<br /><br />I got very little feedback from anyone else. And by that time, I’d had enough distance from the whole thing to see that I'd rushed.<br /><br />It took me some time to recover. It wasn’t my last writing mistake. But it certainly was the one I learned the most from.<br /><br /><i>Just because someone shows interest, doesn’t guarantee publication. It’s always better to wait and revise and wait some more before sending something out. Check your pride at the door. By the time you finally get something published, you’ll be so surprised, you won’t believe it.<br /></i><br />That first conference was a hard lesson, but a good lesson.<br /><br />I don’t regret it. And I don’t regret my other writing mistakes. I keep learning as I go.<br /><br />I've had some successes since, but right now, I'm trying to smell the roses , enjoy the journey, and remember that writing is not an American Idol contest.</p><h2 style="text-align: left;">What is the one thing you regret the most about your writing career? Were you able to overcome it? <br /></h2><p></p><p><b><span style="font-size: large;">What is Insecure Writer's Support Group?</span></b><br />
<br />
<b>Purpose:</b> To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and
concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been
through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven
for insecure writers of all kinds!<br />
<br />
<b>Posting: </b>The first Wednesday of every month is officially
Insecure Writer’s Support Group day. Post your thoughts on your own
blog. Talk about your doubts and the fears you have conquered. Discuss
your struggles and triumphs. Offer a word of encouragement for others
who are struggling. Visit others in the group and connect with your
fellow writer - aim for a dozen new people each time - and return
comments. This group is all about connecting!<br />
<br />
To see more IWSG posts, go <a href="http://www.insecurewriterssupportgroup.com/p/iwsg-sign-up.html">here. </a><span style="font-size: medium;"><br /></span></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-HWj-QIkZvT0/YRrniuYXmaI/AAAAAAAAGWs/YGGiuTemJT0a15UlOcBolA6tS9bL8MI-ACLcBGAsYHQ/s932/Insecure%2BWriters%2BSupport%2BGroup%2BBadge.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="918" data-original-width="932" height="315" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-HWj-QIkZvT0/YRrniuYXmaI/AAAAAAAAGWs/YGGiuTemJT0a15UlOcBolA6tS9bL8MI-ACLcBGAsYHQ/s320/Insecure%2BWriters%2BSupport%2BGroup%2BBadge.jpg" width="320" /></a></div><p><br /><br /></p>Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com7tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-5149212936930072212021-12-01T00:00:00.064-08:002021-12-01T00:00:00.201-08:00ISWG: Writing's Peaks and Valleys <p> </p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-WBhsZCnkIdQ/YaFbTc83rFI/AAAAAAAAHoE/5TlhzlIqhMAaqDa41rob0f4qKiqJKqqBQCLcBGAsYHQ/s2048/rohit-d-silva-Z8ZX1bFmWNA-unsplash.jpg" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="1152" data-original-width="2048" height="180" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-WBhsZCnkIdQ/YaFbTc83rFI/AAAAAAAAHoE/5TlhzlIqhMAaqDa41rob0f4qKiqJKqqBQCLcBGAsYHQ/s320/rohit-d-silva-Z8ZX1bFmWNA-unsplash.jpg" width="320" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;">Photo by <a href="https://unsplash.com/@rohitdsilva?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditCopyText">Rohit D'Silva</a> on <a href="https://unsplash.com/s/photos/hills-and-valley?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditCopyText">Unsplash</a>
</td></tr></tbody></table><p><br /><br /><br />Writing isn't any easy path. I keep writing because I can’t stop. Like a challenging hike that ends with a phenomenal view, sometimes you have to wade through the brambles to get to the beautiful bits. <br /><br /></p><h2 style="text-align: left;">The valleys:</h2><p style="text-align: left;"><br />1. <b>Comparing myself to others</b>. I’m not on social media much anymore, but people posting their daily word counts (always higher than mine) used to stress me out.<br /><br />2. <b> The marketing part of writing</b>. While I’ve learned to write a decent query letter, I've never gotten used to the ups and downs of querying. Can someone else sell my writing, please?<br /><br />3. <b>Worrying about what other people think</b>. When I let that “what will x think of this?” get inside my head in the middle of drafting, I don't do my best writing. Writing must always be truthful, which will probably offend someone.<br /><br /></p><h2 style="text-align: left;">The peaks with their mountain views:</h2><p style="text-align: left;"><br />1. <b>The surprise aspect of writing.</b> I've never written a scene or a piece of dialogue that came out exactly as I expected. I love it when the characters and plot surprise me.<br /><br />2. <b>When the seemingly random threads of the plot come together</b>. In my current WIP, I thought a secondary character's medical condition wasn't that important. But then—boom—I wrote a scene where it became everything and the driving motive for my main character. Those types of connections make writing fun.<br /><br />3. <b>When I get a life-changing critique.</b> It’s always hard to hear criticism of your work, and sometimes I need to wait a few days till I can see my way to solving any problems. But a good critique always helps you see your work in new ways, a true gift.<br /><br />4. <b>Writing has taught me that criticism helps you grow as a person.</b> Writing has given me a thick skin. It's not easy separating yourself from what you write and be willing to hear the hard stuff. But being open to feedback is an invaluable skill in life. And there have been many non-writing times when I've been glad I've learned not to take criticism personally.<br /><br />5. <b>Getting words on paper</b>. It’s often hard to stare at that blank page, but after you’ve written a bulk of your novel, it’s amazing to realize you created something out of nothing. It is a great privilege to use the gifts I’ve been given in this way. <br /></p><h2 style="text-align: left;">What delights you and what stresses you out about writing?</h2><p></p><p><b><span style="font-size: large;">What is Insecure Writer's Support Group?</span></b><br />
<br />
<b>Purpose:</b> To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and
concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been
through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven
for insecure writers of all kinds!<br />
<br />
<b>Posting: </b>The first Wednesday of every month is officially
Insecure Writer’s Support Group day. Post your thoughts on your own
blog. Talk about your doubts and the fears you have conquered. Discuss
your struggles and triumphs. Offer a word of encouragement for others
who are struggling. Visit others in the group and connect with your
fellow writer - aim for a dozen new people each time - and return
comments. This group is all about connecting!<br />
<br />
To see more IWSG posts, go <a href="http://www.insecurewriterssupportgroup.com/p/iwsg-sign-up.html">here. </a><span style="font-size: medium;"><br /></span></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-HWj-QIkZvT0/YRrniuYXmaI/AAAAAAAAGWs/YGGiuTemJT0a15UlOcBolA6tS9bL8MI-ACLcBGAsYHQ/s932/Insecure%2BWriters%2BSupport%2BGroup%2BBadge.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="918" data-original-width="932" height="315" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-HWj-QIkZvT0/YRrniuYXmaI/AAAAAAAAGWs/YGGiuTemJT0a15UlOcBolA6tS9bL8MI-ACLcBGAsYHQ/s320/Insecure%2BWriters%2BSupport%2BGroup%2BBadge.jpg" width="320" /></a></div><br /><br /><p> </p><br /><br /><p><br /><br /></p><p></p>Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com5tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-66578992322785082422021-11-03T00:00:00.023-07:002021-11-03T00:00:00.203-07:00ISWG: Only So Many Words<div><p> </p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-Ir3nwIm3mSU/YX29IpMFTPI/AAAAAAAAHTw/wJjXC6Jl8RIVFrgphFKoowmNpQmmZs-ywCLcBGAsYHQ/s2048/florian-klauer-mk7D-4UCfmg-unsplash.jpg" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="2048" data-original-width="1396" height="200" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-Ir3nwIm3mSU/YX29IpMFTPI/AAAAAAAAHTw/wJjXC6Jl8RIVFrgphFKoowmNpQmmZs-ywCLcBGAsYHQ/w136-h200/florian-klauer-mk7D-4UCfmg-unsplash.jpg" width="136" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><span class="rTNyH RZQOk">Photo by <a href="https://unsplash.com/@florianklauer?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditCopyText">Florian Klauer</a> on <a href="https://unsplash.com/s/photos/words?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditCopyText">Unsplash</a></span></td></tr></tbody></table><br />When I was in high school, my English teacher asked me to be on the high school yearbook. She knew I liked writing, so why not write for a school publication? Much to her surprise, I said no. I wanted to save my words for my fiction writing. I thought if I worked on the yearbook, I'd use all my words up on that. I wouldn’t have any words left over for my own writing. <br /><br />As an adult, it’s much harder to save my words, and prioritize my own writing. <br /><br />But that’s what I’ve been doing lately. I’m not blogging as much—sorry faithful readers—but I am writing.<br /><br />I am now almost half way with a draft of a new YA novel. I’m happier and more excited about writing than I’ve been in a long time. So, perhaps this saving my words thing is working.<br /><br />Never fear, I do plan to get back into writing on this blog more frequently and doing book reviews again. As soon as I can manage to juggle both.<br /></div><b><br /></b><h2 style="text-align: left;"><b>This month’s question: do you find the title or the back copy harder to write?</b></h2><br />Back copy hands down. My husband is really good at titles. He’s come up with 80% of my titles. But struggling through a query synopsis is very hard. I’ve gotten better at it over the years, but it’s still not my favorite thing.<p></p><br /><h2 style="text-align: left;"><b>How about you? Do you find that if you do a lot of writing for other purposes, you don't have words left for your own writing? And which do you find harder: back copy or titles?</b></h2><p><span class="rTNyH RZQOk"></span> <br /></p><p><b><span style="font-size: large;">What is Insecure Writer's Support Group?</span></b><br />
<br />
<b>Purpose:</b> To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and
concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been
through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven
for insecure writers of all kinds!<br />
<br />
<b>Posting: </b>The first Wednesday of every month is officially
Insecure Writer’s Support Group day. Post your thoughts on your own
blog. Talk about your doubts and the fears you have conquered. Discuss
your struggles and triumphs. Offer a word of encouragement for others
who are struggling. Visit others in the group and connect with your
fellow writer - aim for a dozen new people each time - and return
comments. This group is all about connecting!<br />
<br />
To see more IWSG posts, go <a href="http://www.insecurewriterssupportgroup.com/p/iwsg-sign-up.html">here. </a><span style="font-size: medium;"><br /></span></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-HWj-QIkZvT0/YRrniuYXmaI/AAAAAAAAGWs/YGGiuTemJT0a15UlOcBolA6tS9bL8MI-ACLcBGAsYHQ/s932/Insecure%2BWriters%2BSupport%2BGroup%2BBadge.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="918" data-original-width="932" height="315" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-HWj-QIkZvT0/YRrniuYXmaI/AAAAAAAAGWs/YGGiuTemJT0a15UlOcBolA6tS9bL8MI-ACLcBGAsYHQ/s320/Insecure%2BWriters%2BSupport%2BGroup%2BBadge.jpg" width="320" /></a></div><br /><br /><p> </p><p><br /><br /></p>Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com4tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-44494092818967481722021-10-06T00:00:00.002-07:002021-10-06T08:00:54.641-07:00ISWG: Why I’ll Never Write a Memoir<table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-aHoANhiKMh8/YVPt53LKbuI/AAAAAAAAGwo/M2ElEBirxkwIdCKQnCEFJEExy38a3WOowCLcBGAsYHQ/s2048/kourosh-qaffari-RrhhzitYizg-unsplash.jpg" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="2048" data-original-width="1367" height="320" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-aHoANhiKMh8/YVPt53LKbuI/AAAAAAAAGwo/M2ElEBirxkwIdCKQnCEFJEExy38a3WOowCLcBGAsYHQ/w214-h320/kourosh-qaffari-RrhhzitYizg-unsplash.jpg" width="214" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><span style="font-size: xx-small;">Photo by <a href="https://unsplash.com/@kqpho?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditCopyText">Kourosh Qaffari</a> on <a href="https://unsplash.com/s/photos/book?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditCopyText">Unsplash</a></span>
</td></tr></tbody></table><p><br />Many years ago, a friend wrote a semi-autobiographical novel. She turned this in for a creative writing assignment. Although almost everything in the story really happened, the professor said her story was unbelievable. She was incensed. And I thought it strange. Why wouldn’t the truth be believable?<br /><br />Recently another writing friend told me she has met a lot of new writers who want to write their own life story, thinly veiled as fiction. Some great or terrible thing happened to them, and they feel called to share it with the world. My friend keeps telling them they need to learn story craft first. But she isn’t sure they are convinced.<br /><br />All of this led me to think about what I will not write about. There is one line I will not cross: I won’t write about myself. Not directly. <br /><br />A few reasons why:<br /><br />1. <b>Criticism:</b> To be honest, criticism, which is an inevitable in writing, would hit too close to home if I wrote about myself. It’s one thing to have people dislike a world or characters I made up, but quite another to have people hate me. (Although I know that might be inevitable with fiction as well.)<br /><br />2. <b>Reliving difficult or even happy circumstances.</b> In <i>Emma</i>, Mr. Knightley says, "If I loved you less, I might be able to talk about it more." That’s how I feel about certain parts of my life, especially the dramatic moments. I’d rather treasure my memories in private.</p><p></p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-zDTCO1_iG2A/YVPvSUajshI/AAAAAAAAGww/ljWPbLqmOywV6yADZo2_w_Ej7s889fKmQCLcBGAsYHQ/s1000/knightley.jpg" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="532" data-original-width="1000" height="170" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-zDTCO1_iG2A/YVPvSUajshI/AAAAAAAAGww/ljWPbLqmOywV6yADZo2_w_Ej7s889fKmQCLcBGAsYHQ/s320/knightley.jpg" width="320" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><span style="font-size: x-small;">from http://rachelberman.merytonpress.com/</span><br /></td></tr></tbody></table><br /><br />3. <b>I see my past experiences as boring</b>. I grew up in a small town. My life has been pretty ordinary. Maybe everyone’s feels like that. But if I’m not that interested in my childhood or past experiences, I wouldn’t bring a passion to my story that would make other people care.<br /><br />4. <b>I don’t like seeing myself in fiction.</b> I purposely avoid books or movies that are too close to my lived experiences. I’d rather use my experiences to deepen my understanding a character rather than to tell my own story exactly as it happened.<br /><br />5. <b>When I get the urge to “tell people my story,” it’s often for the wrong reasons.</b> Having an epiphany in my life often makes me want to enlighten others. But, people, not surprisingly, are not that interested in my epiphanies. Good stories, the ones everyone loves, always have a theme. But it’s so cleverly woven into the story that you hardly notice it. <br /><br />That’s what I aim for when I’m writing. To write a story so captivating that you forget it’s not real.<br /><br />As for other lines, I am a PG writer, because I write for kids and teens and because of my own Christian convictions. <br /><br />How about you? Is there anything you would not write about? <p></p><p><a href="https://unsplash.com/photos/RrhhzitYizg?utm_source=unsplash&utm_medium=referral&utm_content=creditShareLink">Photo Credit</a><br /><br /></p><p><b><span style="font-size: large;">What is Insecure Writer's Support Group?</span></b><br />
<br />
<b>Purpose:</b> To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and
concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been
through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven
for insecure writers of all kinds!<br />
<br />
<b>Posting: </b>The first Wednesday of every month is officially
Insecure Writer’s Support Group day. Post your thoughts on your own
blog. Talk about your doubts and the fears you have conquered. Discuss
your struggles and triumphs. Offer a word of encouragement for others
who are struggling. Visit others in the group and connect with your
fellow writer - aim for a dozen new people each time - and return
comments. This group is all about connecting!<br />
<br />
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It’s taken me a long time to learn how to laugh at myself and not take life so seriously. And interestingly enough, it wasn’t till I could laugh at myself that I was able to create humorous scenes in my own writing.<br /><br />Maybe because I’ve had to work so hard to learn to write humor that I’m an awe of writers who seemingly do so naturally. Although maybe they have had to work as hard as me too—but hide it well.<br /><br />Today I’m sharing two humorous and fun MG books. Both of these are sequels, and often sequels are not an improvement on the first book. But this is not true here. I hope you enjoy these picks!</p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-7lgWGFvf7Lc/YQWT0t5eMpI/AAAAAAAAGLo/2i_9KltitIIRsVHtXteS3Zu1VOaFC6d2wCLcBGAsYHQ/s346/almostroyalty.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="346" data-original-width="259" height="320" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-7lgWGFvf7Lc/YQWT0t5eMpI/AAAAAAAAGLo/2i_9KltitIIRsVHtXteS3Zu1VOaFC6d2wCLcBGAsYHQ/s320/almostroyalty.jpg" width="240" /></a></div><br /><p><br /><br />The first is <i>Lord and Lady Bunny—Almost Royalty!</i> by Polly Horvath<br /><br />Synopsis from Amazon:<br /><br /><i>This hilarious sequel to Mr. and Mrs. Bunny-Detectives Extraordinaire! is a bunny-rific "tail" that even includes a guest appearance by J. K. Rowling a.k.a. "Oldwhatshername". <br /><br />Madeleine wants nothing more than to save money for college, but her impractical, ex-hippie parents are broke. When the family unexpectedly inherits a sweet shoppe in England that has the potential to earn serious profit, they see an answer to all their problems. . . . Meanwhile, Mr. and Mrs. Bunny—formerly of the detecting persuasion—are looking for new professions, and Mrs. Bunny decides she would like to be Queen. Soon they, too, are headed across the pond. Brought to you by National Book Award-winning author Polly Horvath and Caldecott Medal–winning illustrator Sophie Blackall, the adventures of Madeleine and the Bunnys are zanier than ever.</i></p><p>My thoughts:<br /><br />I reviewed the first of <a href="https://jennienzor.blogspot.com/search?q=horvath">Horvath’s Mr. and Mrs. Bunny books</a> two months ago. I liked this one even better, but then I have a soft spot for anything set across the pond. Not only does “Oldwhatshername” make an appearance and give the bunnies some interesting advice, but Horvath has a cameo as well. The puns and silliness are even better than the first book. Madeleine’s parents discover sugar—and her mom temporarily becomes Cruise Mildred, who likes to shop. The bunnies rub noses with snobby hedgehogs and a rabbit Shakespeare group. Horvath, as always, takes lots of pokes at modern life. I especially enjoyed the English royalty and suburban mom jokes!<br /></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-1BINAujhLNc/YQWT8umRocI/AAAAAAAAGLs/jQtht6eO9qw6zCuLcTpOK4u4LjK9T4sEgCLcBGAsYHQ/s500/willoughbysreturn.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="500" data-original-width="338" height="320" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-1BINAujhLNc/YQWT8umRocI/AAAAAAAAGLs/jQtht6eO9qw6zCuLcTpOK4u4LjK9T4sEgCLcBGAsYHQ/s320/willoughbysreturn.jpg" width="216" /></a></div><br /><p><br />And then there's <i>The Willoughbys Return</i> by Lois Lowry:</p><p>Synopsis from Amazon:<br /><br /><i>It's been 30 years and with rising temperatures melting icy mountain tops the previously frozen Willoughbys have thawed out and are about to return! From living legend and Newbery medalist Lois Lowry comes a hilarious sequel to New York Times bestseller The Willoughbys—soon to be an animated film starring Ricky Gervais, Maya Rudolph, Terry Crews, Martin Short, Jane Krakowski, and Sean Cullen on Netflix!</i></p><p><br /><i>Although they grew up as wretched orphans, the Willoughby siblings also became heirs to the the Melanoff candy company fortune. Everything has turned out just splendidly, except for one problem: Richie Willoughby, son of Timothy Willoughby, is an only child and is quite lonely.<br />Winifred and Winston Poore have long admired the toys of their neighbor Richie Willoughby and finally befriend the mysterious boy next door. But just as Richie finally begins to make friends, selling sweets is made illegal, and the family's fortune is put in jeopardy. To make matters worse, Richie's horrible Willoughby grandparents—frozen atop a Swiss mountain thirty years ago—have thawed, remain in perfect health, and are making their way home again.</i></p><p><i><br />What is the point of being the reclusive son of a billionaire when your father is no longer a billionaire? What is the future without candy in it? And is there any escaping the odiousness of the Willoughbys? These are the profound questions with which Newbery medalist and ignominious author Lois Lowry grapples in </i>The Willoughbys Return<i>.<br /></i> </p><p>Lowry has an amazing range. The first book I read by her was <i>A Summer to Die</i> when I was in elementary school. Then there’s <i>The Giver</i>, a dystopian classic.<br /><br />But Lois is not just a serious writer, she knows how to make fun of herself and classic children lit. The first Willoughby book roasted kidlit’s love affair with orphans and babies being left on doorsteps. In <i>The Willoughbys Return</i>, she has the running joke about how poverty is glorified in kid lit, like in <i>Little Women</i>. The Poore mother is always “Marming”—offering Marme-like advice, which no one takes seriously. The joke continues with plays on words in the character names: Richie is rich and the Poores are poor. The Willoughby parents are still persnickety despite being frozen for 30 years, and their lack of understanding of modern life (What’s Google?) made me chuckle throughout. <br /><br />What books have made you laugh lately?</p><p class="MsoNormal"> If you'd like to read more middle grade reviews or join in the MMGM fun, go to <a href="https://gpattridge.com/">Greg Pattridge's Always in the Middle</a> blog. </p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-cQaWZF6vzpA/U1vd87rkCkI/AAAAAAAAAYY/7KsCdWSOu40efka56oLDn4fub8Ey2O9RgCPcBGAYYCw/s200/MMGM2.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="200" data-original-width="200" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-cQaWZF6vzpA/U1vd87rkCkI/AAAAAAAAAYY/7KsCdWSOu40efka56oLDn4fub8Ey2O9RgCPcBGAYYCw/s0/MMGM2.jpg" /></a></div><p> </p><br />Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com9tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-2385534172734803492021-08-04T00:00:00.001-07:002021-08-04T00:00:00.191-07:00ISWG: Writing Backwards<p> </p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-eh0LtMsQc5Y/YQCLcYkYEAI/AAAAAAAAGIc/tZa4frxLro0w6vqJoSiu90Kml6B9oHmWgCLcBGAsYHQ/s275/storygenuis.png" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="275" data-original-width="183" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-eh0LtMsQc5Y/YQCLcYkYEAI/AAAAAAAAGIc/tZa4frxLro0w6vqJoSiu90Kml6B9oHmWgCLcBGAsYHQ/s0/storygenuis.png" /></a></div><br /><p></p><p>I’ve had a lot of craft books that have inspired me over the years. I’ve read <a href="https://jennienzor.blogspot.com/2017/08/iswg-should-hero-or-heroine-be-heroic.html">great things about characters, plots, scenes</a>. But I'd never found a book on creating a character arc/internal plot.<br /> </p><p>Oh, is this something I need help with. I have the tendency to create Mary Sues for my protagonist, and the few times I’ve tried to create a character that needed to grow more—no one liked them!<br /><br />I’ve heard lots of advice online on how to create a character arc. I read that I just needed to focus on the main plot and add the internal plot in later or not to really worry about it. If you write the book, the internal arc will come.<br /><br />But that wasn’t working for me.<br /><br />Then a friend loaned me <i>Story Genuis</i> by <a href="http://wiredforstory.com/">Lisa Cron</a>. It’s the first book that spelled out how to create a character arc in a way that made sense to me.</p><p></p><h1 style="text-align: left;"><span style="font-family: helvetica;">The story is what creates beautiful writing...not the other way around. Lisa Cron</span><br /></h1><p><br />What I learned from <i>Story Genuis</i>:<br /><br />1.<b> The main story is the character arc.</b> Lisa Cron goes into a lot of brain science to back up this claim in the book, but basically we read stories to vicariously experience someone’s life struggle. The character arc is the plot.<br /><br />2. <b>Write an “origin scene” for your character’s misbelief.</b> I knew the importance of creating a misbelief, but I didn’t know how to make it organic to the story. Once I wrote my character's origin story, her struggle became so much more real to me. </p><p>3. <b>Details begat details.</b> After writing your character’s origin story, you write the scenes from that scene to the start of your present story. I ended up with at least 4-5 scenes that happened before the book starts. And even though not all of them will make it into the novel, what I learned about my main character will.<br /><br />4. <b>If a scene is not working, ask yourself whether the events challenge your character’s misbelief</b>. This was an issue for me before. I’d often create lots of action-packed scenes, but they often had nothing to do with the character’s misbelief and weren’t very compelling. </p><p><br />5. <b>Interiority comes easier when you filter everything through the lens of the character’s misbelief. </b>As I kept asking myself Lisa’s scene questions as I wrote, tension and internal conflict seemed to come automatically.<br /><br />6. <b>If you get stuck, go back to the backstory</b>. I use Cron’s technique of writing backstory scenes whenever I get stuck. I’ve written some scenes for my other characters just to get to know them. I don’t like writing character history or charts, but writing scenes helps me understand them on a deeper level.<br /><br />A couple caveats: I don’t think Cron’s book is the best book for new writers. It doesn’t go over the basics. For me, this was okay, because I really needed to work on character arc. Also, her examples are from chick lit, so if you write something else (like me), you’ll have to apply these ideas to your genre. But I think her principles work for every genre.</p><p>What craft books have inspired you lately?</p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-GjE4AUUtnRw/WYEHk7_xFDI/AAAAAAAABEw/S7gGUxeKrJYgzo-N6J2TD9h8p8pMbeM9QCPcBGAYYCw/s320/Insecure%2BWriters%2BSupport%2BGroup%2BBadge.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="315" data-original-width="320" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-GjE4AUUtnRw/WYEHk7_xFDI/AAAAAAAABEw/S7gGUxeKrJYgzo-N6J2TD9h8p8pMbeM9QCPcBGAYYCw/s0/Insecure%2BWriters%2BSupport%2BGroup%2BBadge.jpg" /></a></div><br /><div style="text-align: center;">
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<span style="font-size: large;">The awesome co-hosts for the August 4 posting of the IWSG are<b> <a _blank="" href="http://www.pkhrezo.com/blog”target=">PK Hrezo,</a> <a _blank="" href="http://cathrinaconstantine.blogspot.com”target=">Cathrina Constantine,</a> <a href="http://www.pjcolando.com/" target="_blank">PJ Colando,</a> <a href="http://kimlajevardi.com/" target="_blank">Kim Lajevardi,</a></b> and <b><a href="http://sandracox.blogspot.com/" target="_blank">Sandra Cox!</a></b> </span></div><p><br /></p>Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com8tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-73670542886025485532021-07-19T00:00:00.010-07:002021-07-31T11:32:01.606-07:00#IMWAYR/MMGM: Secret Sisters of the Salty Sea and The Explorer<p>It’s been a little while since I’ve made it to my computer to write up a middle grade review. We’ve had the usual end-of-the-school year busy-ness, and last week we went to visit some friends in Eastern Oregon. Along the way, we stopped to see the beautiful Painted Hills (one of the seven wonders of Oregon!) and dug for fossils. Summer must include a few adventures!<br /></p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-Qvse8T6H1Cc/YOzCB7E09sI/AAAAAAAAF2E/-v3Fbfxtr-ApVcLDw2pwWB-QCs4ohOvRACLcBGAsYHQ/s2048/IMG_20210708_175745291.jpg" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="1536" data-original-width="2048" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-Qvse8T6H1Cc/YOzCB7E09sI/AAAAAAAAF2E/-v3Fbfxtr-ApVcLDw2pwWB-QCs4ohOvRACLcBGAsYHQ/s320/IMG_20210708_175745291.jpg" width="320" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><span style="font-size: xx-small;">The famous red hill from the Painted Hills.</span><br /></td></tr></tbody></table><p><br />Today, I wanted to share two summer reads with you. I read them awhile back, but they stayed with me. They both have adventures, perfect for summer. </p><p></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-eQ8Il9pg27Q/YOzDf3G-7aI/AAAAAAAAF2M/uFPhZ5Rh-7M66l5rib4WNE5U-EbCytqdACLcBGAsYHQ/s218/secretsistersofsaltysea.jpg" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="218" data-original-width="167" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-eQ8Il9pg27Q/YOzDf3G-7aI/AAAAAAAAF2M/uFPhZ5Rh-7M66l5rib4WNE5U-EbCytqdACLcBGAsYHQ/s0/secretsistersofsaltysea.jpg" /></a></div>Synopsis for <i>Secret Sisters of the Salty Sea</i> by Lynne Rae Perkins (synopsis from the author’s website):<br /><br /><i>Alix and Jools are off on a family vacation. It’s their first vacation ever that isn’t about visiting relatives. And even though it’s also going to be the first time they see the ocean, in real life, Alix is pretty sure she knows what it will be like.<br /><br />But of all the things that happen, not a single one is something she expected. Because you just never know what amazing thing will happen next.<br /></i><br />I was a little unsure of this book at first because I wasn’t a huge fan of Perkin's<i> Criss Cross</i>, but I’m so glad I picked this one up. So many middle grades deal with things that couldn’t happen in real life, but this is a sweet read about the ordinary adventures of a family on vacation.<br /><br />When my kids were younger, I often worried they were bored because we “only” went to the beach for vacation most summers and never anywhere exotic. This book is a good reminder that adventures can be had anywhere if you look for them.<br /><br />Favorite quote: “They would do this for a week, then come back home and remember it forever.”<p></p><p></p><p><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-FHo8s_N9fuE/YOzARuUgDyI/AAAAAAAAF14/u3_iZJ5dZMw1aa4c457NtlN40Ot_7-sFQCLcBGAsYHQ/s500/theexplorer.jpg" style="clear: right; float: right; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="500" data-original-width="331" height="320" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-FHo8s_N9fuE/YOzARuUgDyI/AAAAAAAAF14/u3_iZJ5dZMw1aa4c457NtlN40Ot_7-sFQCLcBGAsYHQ/s320/theexplorer.jpg" /></a> <i>The Explorer </i>by Kathleen Rundell (synopsis from Amazon):<br /><br /><i><b>From Boston Globe–Horn Book Award winner Katherine Rundell comes an exciting new novel about a group of kids who must survive in the Amazon after their plane crashes.</b><br /><br />Fred, Con, Lila, and Max are on their way back to England from Manaus when the plane they’re on crashes and the pilot dies upon landing. For days they survive alone, until Fred finds a map that leads them to a ruined city, and to a secret.</i><br /><br />I picked this up because I have loved almost everything by this author, especially <a href="https://jennienzor.blogspot.com/2015/08/mmgm-cartwheeling-in-thunderstorms.html">Cartwheeling in Thunderstorms</a> and <a href="https://jennienzor.blogspot.com/2014/04/marvelous-middle-grade-monday.html">The Roofkeepers</a>. The Explorer reminded me a little of Hatchet, but with a larger cast and an Amazon setting, including sloths and tarantulas. But what I liked best the theme of what makes someone an explorer. (It's not what you think.) This book would be perfect for animal lovers and kids who are interested in the Amazon rainforest.<br /><br />What books have you loved lately?</p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal"> If you'd like to read more middle grade reviews or join in the MMGM fun, go to <a href="https://gpattridge.com/">Greg Pattridge's Always in the Middle</a> blog. </p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-cQaWZF6vzpA/U1vd87rkCkI/AAAAAAAAAYY/7KsCdWSOu40efka56oLDn4fub8Ey2O9RgCPcBGAYYCw/s200/MMGM2.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="200" data-original-width="200" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-cQaWZF6vzpA/U1vd87rkCkI/AAAAAAAAAYY/7KsCdWSOu40efka56oLDn4fub8Ey2O9RgCPcBGAYYCw/s0/MMGM2.jpg" /></a></div><p><br /><br /></p>Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com9tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-5583091550995132422021-07-07T00:00:00.017-07:002021-07-07T00:00:00.182-07:00ISWG: What Would Make You Quit?<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-TmV71eL1BB0/V5U6dY-6rrI/AAAAAAAAA2k/UVahyQ_Uo9UC0hHTrqvq7cUts2MIS7QRgCPcBGAYYCw/s320/Insecure%2BWriters%2BSupport%2BGroup%2BBadge.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="315" data-original-width="320" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-TmV71eL1BB0/V5U6dY-6rrI/AAAAAAAAA2k/UVahyQ_Uo9UC0hHTrqvq7cUts2MIS7QRgCPcBGAYYCw/s0/Insecure%2BWriters%2BSupport%2BGroup%2BBadge.jpg" /></a></div><br /><p><b><span style="font-size: large;">This month's question: What would make you stop writing?</span></b></p><p><b><span style="font-size: large;"><i><span style="font-size: x-small;">Note: This post is updated content from my <a href="https://jennienzor.blogspot.com/2017/06/iswg-finding-your-way-back.html">June 7, 2017 ISWG post.</a></span></i><br /></span></b></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">I
have many different times in my life when I wanted to quit. The longest
stretch was about twelve years ago. I had a lot going on in my personal
life (my younger son required two surgeries within the space of a few
months), and I’d gotten some discouraging feedback on a new project.
I’ve since learned never to let anyone see my first drafts, but I didn’t
know that then. I was so discouraged I set that book aside.<br /><br />That’s
when the writer's block started. For a few months, I just wrote, “I
can’t write anything,” in my journal. At least I was writing words,
right?</span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">About five years ago, I almost quit again. I had gone back to work full-time after many years at as a stay-at-home mom. I didn't see where I could squeeze writing in. </span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;"><b>How did I find my way back?</b> <br /></span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">Both times, I asked myself
what I really wanted to write if I
didn’t have to worry about anyone else reading it. This led me to
tackling a YA retelling, a book of my heart. Now I'm working on a YA sci-fi I'm really excited about. Instead of writing for the
market, I wrote just for me.<br /><br /></span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;"><span><!--[if gte mso 9]><xml>
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</span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">That book didn’t sell, but I got a lot of good feedback on
it. <span>It served its purpose
though.</span> I
found my love of writing again. Because if I don’t enjoy writing, why
am I doing this anyway?<br /><br />I’ve since learned that I’m often most
vulnerable to giving up when life presents me with a mix of writing
obstacles and difficult life circumstances. But now dealing with those bad days or or months when
writing comes harder is easier. I know they won’t last forever.<br /><br />All I need to keep in mind is why I’m writing in the first place: <b>What do I like to read? What do I like to write?</b><br /><br />If that’s my focus, I won’t give up for long.</span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;">Is there anything that would make you quit writing?<br /></span><br />
<br />
<br />
<b><span style="font-size: large;">What is Insecure Writer's Support Group?</span></b><br />
<br />
<b>Purpose:</b> To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and
concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been
through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven
for insecure writers of all kinds!<br />
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<b>Posting: </b>The first Wednesday of every month is officially
Insecure Writer’s Support Group day. Post your thoughts on your own
blog. Talk about your doubts and the fears you have conquered. Discuss
your struggles and triumphs. Offer a word of encouragement for others
who are struggling. Visit others in the group and connect with your
fellow writer - aim for a dozen new people each time - and return
comments. This group is all about connecting!<br />
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To see more IWSG posts, go <a href="http://www.insecurewriterssupportgroup.com/p/iwsg-sign-up.html">here. </a><span style="font-size: medium;"><br /></span></p>Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com14tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-71744640368510596192021-06-14T00:00:00.025-07:002021-06-14T00:00:00.175-07:00#IMWAYR/MMGM: Mr. and Mrs. Bunny—Detectives Extraordinaire!<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-TlQdSh_hROg/YMUFjW5DfyI/AAAAAAAAFQw/IVqQN3Y5ok4R5LYR63rZemyNCX_Xam26ACLcBGAsYHQ/s338/mrandmrsbunny.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="338" data-original-width="260" height="320" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-TlQdSh_hROg/YMUFjW5DfyI/AAAAAAAAFQw/IVqQN3Y5ok4R5LYR63rZemyNCX_Xam26ACLcBGAsYHQ/s320/mrandmrsbunny.jpg" /></a></div><br /><p><br /><br />I have another bunny book for you today! I can’t believe how long it took me to discover Polly Horvath, but if the rest of her work is like this enchanting chapter book, I have a new favorite author!<br /><br />Not only is this a mystery, it’s hilarious, and it includes bunnies (of course!) But it’s also set on Vancouver Island and the Gulf Islands in the Puget Sound, near where I grew up. My husband and I went to the Gulf Islands on our honeymoon. They are rustic and beautiful—and I’ll never forget seeing a pod of Orca whales a few feet from our kayaks.<br /><br />But on to this fabulous story.<br /><br />Synopsis from Amazon:<br /><i><br />In this hilarious chapter book mystery, meet a girl whose parents have been kidnapped by disreputable foxes, and a pair of detectives that also happen to be bunnies! When Madeline gets home from school one afternoon to discover that her parents have gone missing, she sets off to find them. So begins a once-in-a-lifetime adventure involving a cast of unforgettable characters. There's Mr. and Mrs. Bunny, who drive a smart car, wear fedoras, and hate marmots; the Marmot, who loves garlic bread and is a brilliant translator; and many others. Translated from the Rabbit by Newbery Honor-winning author Polly Horvath, and beautifully illustrated by Caldecott Medal winner Sophie Blackall, here is a book that kids will both laugh over and love.<br /><br />"National Book Award-winner Polly Horvath's latest, a rabbity romp complete with whimsical illustrations and a quirky cast of characters, has both the look and feel of a classic children's book," raves The Washington Post.</i><br /><br />What I liked:<br /><br />1.<b> A girl who’s smarter than her parents.</b> Oh, this kind of character is one of my favorites! Think Matilda or Gladys Gatsby from All Four Stars. Madeleine is a regular kid and very practical, but her ex-hippie parents are rather clueless at times.<br /><br />2. <b>Animals that have defined personalities!</b> Mr. Bunny thinks making car noises will start a car. Mrs. Bunny is the straight man for his jokes and wants to adopt poor Madeleine. Then there’s the marmot who likes to be called “The.” And many more!<br /><br />3. <b>Unique mystery plot:</b> In most mysteries, the reader is trying to piece together the clues to figure out what happened. In this book, due to multiple POV, the reader knows what happened, but the suspense is whether these rabbits, who think being a detective means wearing a fedora, can rescue Madeleine’s parents.<br /><br />4. <b>Canadian setting:</b> This book is infused with the atmosphere of the Gulf Islands. I also liked the importance placed on Prince Charles’ visit and how different characters viewed this event. This was clearly a Canadian story.<br /><br />5. <b>Lyrical, humorous writing: </b>This book reminded of the Roald Dahl books I loved as a child. It’s rare to find a children’s book that doesn’t take itself seriously and understands how children think. Horvath has a firm grasp on what makes kids and adults laugh. <br /><br />And there’s a sequel, which I currently have on order. <i>Lord and Lady Bunny—Almost Royalty!</i><br /><br />What books have you loved lately?</p><br /><p class="MsoNormal"> If you'd like to read more middle grade reviews or join in the MMGM fun, go to <a href="https://gpattridge.com/">Greg Pattridge's Always in the Middle</a> blog. </p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-cQaWZF6vzpA/U1vd87rkCkI/AAAAAAAAAYY/7KsCdWSOu40efka56oLDn4fub8Ey2O9RgCPcBGAYYCw/s200/MMGM2.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="200" data-original-width="200" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-cQaWZF6vzpA/U1vd87rkCkI/AAAAAAAAAYY/7KsCdWSOu40efka56oLDn4fub8Ey2O9RgCPcBGAYYCw/s0/MMGM2.jpg" /></a></div>Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com15tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-76270813234662327092021-06-02T00:00:00.007-07:002021-06-02T00:00:00.167-07:00ISWG: Letting the Paint Dry<p> </p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-wSf19D4FCjQ/WNqxDo0xIMI/AAAAAAAAA8E/1JTw73iIEv0skeYxHhNVOQnBaXk6uzgNwCPcBGAYYCw/s320/Insecure%2BWriters%2BSupport%2BGroup%2BBadge.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="315" data-original-width="320" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-wSf19D4FCjQ/WNqxDo0xIMI/AAAAAAAAA8E/1JTw73iIEv0skeYxHhNVOQnBaXk6uzgNwCPcBGAYYCw/s0/Insecure%2BWriters%2BSupport%2BGroup%2BBadge.jpg" /></a></div><br /><p></p><p>If there’s one thing I’ve learned over this writing journey is that you can’t rush.<br /><br />When I first started writing, I different goal posts in mind. Get published by x age. Or after x years. Somehow I thought that meant success.<br /><br />I definitely made the mistake of rushing—and not shelving—that first draft of my first novel. With each novel, I’ve learned the importance of taking a step back.</p><p><br />It’s like <a href="https://jennienzor.blogspot.com/2020/09/what-i-learned-about-writing-from.html">watercolor painting</a>. You have to let each layer dry before you add another layer. And like in painting, you also have to know when to stop. I’m always amazed at the difference between a wet painting and a dry painting. What I thought was awful is not so bad when it’s dry.<br /><br />Writing is like that too.<br /><br />Yet with each book I have a different process. Sometimes I’ve written a messy first draft all at once, no stops. Other times, like now, I’m writing and revising and plotting and brainstorming all at once.<br /><br />Which one is better? I’ll let you know.<br /><br />For now, for longer works, I generally take at least a month off. Although more time is even better.<br /><br />For shorter works, I take less time. But it really depends. Short works also tend to get the back burner.<br /><br />But no matter how much time, the key is not to rush. The more I step back, give it time, and see it as a whole, the better it is. <br /><br /><br />Other writing news:<br /><br />If you haven’t had a chance to see it, <a href="https://www.pbs.org/wnet/americanmasters/stream-amy-tan-unintended-memoir-documentary/17722/">Amy Tan’s Unintended Memoir,</a> is very inspiring. It’s still on PBS online, but you might have to have a PBS passport to view. Here is the trailer:<br /></p><p></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><iframe allowfullscreen="" class="BLOG_video_class" height="266" src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/6YgMPgtovxI" width="320" youtube-src-id="6YgMPgtovxI"></iframe></div><br /><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><br /></div><br /><br /><a href="https://savvyauthors.com/">Savvy Authors Courses</a>: I recently took my first course with this site. These are self-paced courses (for a certain length of time, usually 4 weeks). It takes place via discussion board. The teacher posts content and exercises twice a week. It’s really helping me hone in on my WIP. And these classes are very affordable ($30-40). No, I’m not an affiliate or anything. It’s just so hard to find affordable writing classes. Highly recommended!<br /><br />Last but not least, I have passed the 10,000 word mark on my WIP. It’s been a very long time since I’ve been in the drafting stage on a new novel. I consider the reason I got this far is due to the wonderful <a href="https://jennienzor.blogspot.com/2021/04/mmgm-on-other-side-of-island.html">Story Genius</a> book and the support of an in-person writing friend, who’s keeping me accountable by meeting me for coffee and the reading of chapters every week.<br /><p></p><p>To learn more about ISWG or to sign up, go to the <a href="https://www.insecurewriterssupportgroup.com/p/iwsg-sign-up.html">ISWG website.</a></p><p>What about you? Do you take a certain time away from first drafts? <br /></p><br />Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com8tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-89436084602361936092021-05-17T00:00:00.078-07:002021-05-17T00:00:00.178-07:00MMGM/#IMWAYR: Swipe<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-Q2_pHIJPFW8/YJ36XPSTnAI/AAAAAAAAE7o/TSqq41n35RUbdTj7MXZ3XHfV4y6y33r2ACLcBGAsYHQ/s293/swipe.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="293" data-original-width="193" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-Q2_pHIJPFW8/YJ36XPSTnAI/AAAAAAAAE7o/TSqq41n35RUbdTj7MXZ3XHfV4y6y33r2ACLcBGAsYHQ/s0/swipe.jpg" /></a></div><br />I have another dystopian book for you today. I plan on
branching out to other genres soon, but this one was too good to pass up.
<p class="MsoNormal">Synopsis from Amazon:</p>
<p><b><i style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal;">Everyone
gets the Mark. It gives all the benefits of citizenship. Yet if
getting the Mark is such a good thing, then why does it feel so wrong?</i></b><i style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal;"> </i></p>
<p><i style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal;">Set in a future North America that is
struggling to recover after famine and global war, </i><i><span style="font-style: normal; mso-bidi-font-style: italic;">Swipe</span></i><i style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal;"> follows the lives of three kids caught in
the middle of a conflict they didn’t even know existed. United under a
charismatic leader, every citizen of the American Union is required to get the
Mark on their 13th birthday in order to gain the benefits of
citizenship. </i></p>
<p><i style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal;">The Mark is a tattoo that must be
swiped by special scanners for everything from employment to transportation to
shopping. It’s almost Logan Langly’s 13th birthday and he knows he should be
excited about getting the Mark, but he hasn’t been able to shake the feeling
he’s being watched. Not since his sister went to get her Mark five years ago .
. . and never came back. </i></p>
<p><i style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal;">When Logan and his friends discover
the truth behind the Mark, will they ever be able to go back to being normal
teenagers? Find out in the first book of this exciting series that is </i><i><span style="font-style: normal; mso-bidi-font-style: italic;">Left Behind</span></i><i style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal;"> meets </i><i><span style="font-style: normal; mso-bidi-font-style: italic;">Matched</span></i><i style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal;"> for middle-grade readers.</i></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">What I liked:</p>
<ol style="text-align: left;"><li><span style="mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-theme-font: minor-latin;"><span style="mso-list: Ignore;"><span></span></span></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;">World building</b>:
The key to a good dystopian, fantasy, or sci novel is the world building. And
for me, the backstory of why the world is the way it is has to make logical
sense. (Don’t get me started on the dystopians where they banish stupid
people!) Angler did a great job with including some fun elements (houses are
built in stories since land is too expensive), while having logical reasons for
why the world worked as it did.<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span> </span></b></li><li><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span></span><span></span>Sympathetic
Main Characters</b>: I thought both Logan, with his anxiety and missing sister,
and Erin, with her interest in spying and longing to get her family back
together, were well-drawn and realistic. Having completely different ways of
looking at the world added to the tension.<span style="mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-theme-font: minor-latin;"><span style="mso-list: Ignore;"><span style="font: 7pt "Times New Roman";"><span style="font-size: small;"> </span></span></span></span></li><li><span style="mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-theme-font: minor-latin;"><span style="mso-list: Ignore;"><span style="font: 7pt "Times New Roman";"><span style="font-size: small;"><b>A</b> </span><b></b></span></span></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;">dystopian
that’s really a mystery.</b> If I were to categorize this book, I’d put it more
firmly in the category of mystery, but with a dystopian setting. I liked
discovering along with Logan and Erin what was really happening to those who
took the mark, who the Dust were, and what happened to Logan’s sister.<span style="mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-theme-font: minor-latin;"><span style="mso-list: Ignore;"><span style="font: 7pt "Times New Roman";"><span style="font-size: small;"> </span></span></span></span></li><li><span style="mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-theme-font: minor-latin;"><span style="mso-list: Ignore;"><span style="font: 7pt "Times New Roman";"><span style="font-size: small;"> </span></span></span></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;">A main
character you can look up to:</b> I read a book with a similar plot line where
the main character didn’t rise to the challenge when faced with a difficult
choice. But this book was different. By
the end of the book, Logan wasn’t satisfied to hide and stay safe. He was
willing to risk his life to find out the truth about his sister—and that’s the
kind of hero I love.<span style="mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-theme-font: minor-latin;"><span style="mso-list: Ignore;"><span style="font: 7pt "Times New Roman";"><span style="font-size: small;"> </span></span></span></span></li><li><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;">An ending that gave closure, even though it’s
a start of a series. </b>It’s frustrating when the first book of a series ends
on a cliffhanger that doesn’t tie up any lose ends. This book had a clear
climax and resolution, but left a few open threads for the next book, which I’m
reading right now.</li></ol>
<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">Minor Quibbles: This book is multiple point
of view. While I felt like that worked most of the time with Erin and Logan,
when other characters’ POVs were included, it got a little muddy for me. But
this was a small thing.</p>
<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle"> Book trailer:</p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><iframe allowfullscreen="" class="BLOG_video_class" height="266" src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/QwHV3lgO-PM" width="320" youtube-src-id="QwHV3lgO-PM"></iframe></div><br /><p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle"></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle">About the author (from the <a href="http://evanangler.com">author's website</a>):</p>
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is Evan Angler?</span></p><table border="0" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="MsoNormalTable" style="mso-cellspacing: 0in; mso-padding-alt: 1.5pt 1.5pt 1.5pt 1.5pt; mso-yfti-tbllook: 1184; width: 801px;"><tbody><tr style="mso-yfti-firstrow: yes; mso-yfti-irow: 0;"><td style="padding: 1.5pt;" valign="top"></td><td style="padding: 1.5pt;" valign="top"><p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 0in;"></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 0in;"><span style="font-family: "Helvetica Neue","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";">Evan
Angler is safe, for now. He lives without the Mark, evading DOME and writing
in the shadows of Beacon.</span><span style="font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><br />
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</span><span style="font-family: "Helvetica Neue","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";">As
a kid he was quiet and well-behaved, having grown up in a town not unlike
Spokie, where he enjoyed music, drawing, hover-dodge, astrophysics, hiking,
virtual reality . . . </span><span style="font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><br />
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</span><span style="font-family: "Helvetica Neue","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";">None
of that matters now.</span><span style="font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><br />
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</span><span style="font-family: "Helvetica Neue","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";">Evan
Angler is the author of the Swipe Series. But if anyone asks, you know
nothing about it, and you didn't hear anything from him. Don't make eye
contact if you see him. Don't call his name out loud. He's in enough trouble
already.</span><span style="font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";"><br />
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</span><span style="font-family: "Helvetica Neue","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";">And
so are you, if you've read his books.</span><span style="font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></p>
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<span> </span><span> </span><span> </span><span> </span><span> </span><span> </span><span> </span><span> </span><span> </span><span> </span><span> </span><span> </span>Evan Angler </span><p></p>
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you just love that bio? <br /></span></p>
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books have you loved lately? </span><span style="font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";"></span></p>
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Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com18tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-91910133790661767692021-05-05T00:00:00.017-07:002021-05-05T15:51:33.660-07:00ISWG: The Surprising Effect of Your Own Words<p> </p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-t71sPbwMysU/YHso0nyS4BI/AAAAAAAAEzk/qCGGSxlIzccUDrNAVMx1veLUtw8ILwzVACLcBGAsYHQ/s932/Insecure%2BWriters%2BSupport%2BGroup%2BBadge.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="918" data-original-width="932" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-t71sPbwMysU/YHso0nyS4BI/AAAAAAAAEzk/qCGGSxlIzccUDrNAVMx1veLUtw8ILwzVACLcBGAsYHQ/s320/Insecure%2BWriters%2BSupport%2BGroup%2BBadge.jpg" width="320" /></a></div><span style="font-size: medium;"><br /></span><p><span style="font-size: medium;">I still remember the first time my writing affected someone else. My aunt died of leukemia when I was in junior high, and I wrote a very thinly veiled short story about someone dying from cancer. I gave it to my best friend, and she cried.<br /><br />As clichéd as that is, that was one of the first sparks that made me what to be a writer. Not that I wanted to make people cry, but I wanted my writing to affect people.<br /><br />Over the years, I’ve often gauged my writing skill by people’s reactions. There was the time I attempted to create heroine with a very big character arc. Well, she was unlikable and her character arc paltry, and I’m thankful for the critique partners who told me so—to my surprise.<br /><br />There have been many other times that people’s reactions stopped me short and made me rethink my story or my characters.<br /><br />I’m not sure if this is a sign of growth, but I’m finding that the longer I write, the less I am surprised by people’s reactions. Of course, most of my audience is other writers, but I’m finding more and more when I write a funny scene, other people do laugh. Except for my teenage friend, I don’t know anyone else who cried. <br /><br />I will keep working on this—trying to make what emotion I want to evoke on the page actually come across to the reader.<br /><br />That is the hardest task of writing, but the most satisfying.</span></p><p><span style="font-size: medium;">Has your writing affected other people in surprising ways?</span></p><p><a href="https://www.insecurewriterssupportgroup.com/p/iwsg-sign-up.html"><b>Insecure Writer's Support Group:</b></a><br /></p><p> <span style="font-size: large;"><b>Purpose:</b> To share and encourage.
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<span style="font-size: large;"><br /> </span></div>Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com13tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-28011221840567929042021-04-19T00:00:00.027-07:002021-04-19T12:56:20.746-07:00MMGM/#IMWAYR: On the Other Side of the Island<div class="separator" style="clear: both;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-g2w_HS-0ybg/YHdDOzytTxI/AAAAAAAAEww/j94WJz7L4OwNkd23F52gwoPs0IgBmiebQCLcBGAsYHQ/s275/OTHERSIDEOFISLAND.jpg" style="display: block; padding: 1em 0px; text-align: center;"><img alt="" border="0" data-original-height="275" data-original-width="183" height="320" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-g2w_HS-0ybg/YHdDOzytTxI/AAAAAAAAEww/j94WJz7L4OwNkd23F52gwoPs0IgBmiebQCLcBGAsYHQ/s320/OTHERSIDEOFISLAND.jpg" /></a></div><br />I’ve sort of been on a dystopian reading binge lately. But honestly, I’ve started many books in this genre and have not been able to finish them because they are just too dark.<br /><br /><i>On the Other Side of the Island</i> was different. And even if you’re not usually a fan of dystopian, I think you might still like this book. It raises interesting questions about control, individuality, and family loyalty. <br /><br />*While I’ve seen this title listed as YA in some places, the main character is 10 when the story starts and the voice is decidedly MG.<br /><br />Synopsis from Amazon:<br /><br /><i>In the eighteenth glorious year of Enclosure, long after The Flood, a young girl named Honor moves with her parents to Island 365 in the Tranquil Sea. Life on the tropical island is peaceful—there is no sadness and no visible violence in this world. Earth Mother and her Corporation have created New Weather. The sky is always blue and it almost never rains. Every family fits into its rightful, orderly, and predictable place…<br /> <br />Except Honors. Her family does not follow the rules. They ignore curfew, sing songs, and do not pray to Earth Mother. Honor doesn’t fit in with the other children at the Old Colony School. Then she meets Helix, a boy with a big heart who slowly helps her uncover a terrible secret about the Island: Sooner or later, those who do not fit disappear, and they don’t ever come back. <br /> </i><br /><i><br />Honor knows her family could be next, and when the unthinkable happens, she must make the dangerous journey to the Other Side of the Island—before Earth Mother comes for her too…</i><br /><br />What I liked:<br /><br />1.<b>Lyrical prose.</b> One of my pet peeves with dystopians is that they often have lots of action, but little attention to the actual writing. Goodman’s writing is beautiful, and she creates such a rich mood and atmosphere. I felt like I was there on this island.<br /><br />2.<b>The importance of names.</b> One of the major plot points of this book is about Honor’s name. In this society, kids from the same birth year are named with the same letter. While Honor’s name does start with H, the h is silent. I loved how her name showed so much about her parents and later was instrumental in the story’s conclusion.<br /><br />3.<b>Conformity vs. being unique</b>. This theme is often common in dystopians, but I liked Honor’s character arc of how she grew from wanting to be like everyone else, which tweens will relate to, to fighting the system.<br /><br />4.<b>Awesome parents.</b> You know how much I love good parents. These parents are nonconformists, even when Honor urges them not to be. They embrace originality and art and are working hard to remember the real past—and trying to get Honor to remember too.<br /><br />5.<b>Nods to class literature.</b> It’s very unusual to find classics in dystopian books. One of my favorite parts of this book was when Honor discovers that the real <i>Wizard of Oz </i>really has a tornado in it. (In a world where bad weather has been eliminated, books about storms are banned.)<br /><br />6.<b>Open Ending.</b> This book has gotten some complaints about its ending. I don’t mind an open ending as long as it works for the book. Not every plot question is answered at the end, but that made it all the more believable. <br /><br />For my writer friends: <br /><br />This is not a MG, but I just finished the most amazing craft book,<i> Story Genuis</i> by Lisa Cron. If you ever struggle like I do with crafting your protagonist’s misbelief, this book is genius (couldn’t help myself with that pun)! It’s a great step-by-step guide on how to build your plot from the inside out with an emphasis on the character’s internal struggle and character arc.<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-BZi7FlbZtIs/YHdBtwiCUrI/AAAAAAAAEwE/2-rsoSmvxaw8njwHGoozk4zuaFbVESddwCLcBGAsYHQ/s275/storygenuis.png" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="275" data-original-width="183" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-BZi7FlbZtIs/YHdBtwiCUrI/AAAAAAAAEwE/2-rsoSmvxaw8njwHGoozk4zuaFbVESddwCLcBGAsYHQ/s0/storygenuis.png" /></a></div><p><br /><br /><br />Highly recommended.<br /><br />What books have you loved lately?</p><p></p>If you'd like to read more middle grade reviews or join in the MMGM fun, go to <a href="https://gpattridge.com/">Greg Pattridge's Always in the Middle</a> blog. <p><br /><br /></p><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com12tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5101126112369382176.post-13118436595392710042021-04-12T00:00:00.000-07:002021-04-12T00:00:00.191-07:00MMGM: Death Cloud<p> </p><p> </p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-R7oPeMm_iCc/YFkK_5mpGgI/AAAAAAAAEkQ/9gDjwZPOcVQJUWPPxl_AP_bxqp_alvhmgCLcBGAsYHQ/s346/deathcloud.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="346" data-original-width="230" height="320" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-R7oPeMm_iCc/YFkK_5mpGgI/AAAAAAAAEkQ/9gDjwZPOcVQJUWPPxl_AP_bxqp_alvhmgCLcBGAsYHQ/s320/deathcloud.jpg" /></a></div><br /><p></p><p> </p><p>We’re a huge fan of mysteries at our house. When we have a long car trip (which admittedly doesn’t happen as often now), we usually listen to Sherlock Holmes on Librovox. <i>Monk</i> is a family favorite. My 16 year old son (reader extraordinaire) got the <i>Complete Tales of Sherlock Holmes</i> for his last birthday and has read it cover to cover multiple times. I was really drawn to the idea of a young Sherlock Holmes. <br /><br />If you like a plot-driven tale with lots of nods to Holmes, you will love this book! And it’s the first of a series, so you could be busy for a long time.<br /><br />Synopsis from Amazon:<br /><br /><i>It is the summer of 1868, and Sherlock Holmes is fourteen. On break from boarding school, he is staying with eccentric strangers―his uncle and aunt―in their vast house in Hampshire. When two local people die from symptoms that resemble the plague, Holmes begins to investigate what really killed them, helped by his new tutor, an American named Amyus Crowe. So begins Sherlock's true education in detection, as he discovers the dastardly crimes of a brilliantly sinister villain of exquisitely malign intent.</i><br /><br />What I liked:<br /><br />1. <b>Great sidekicks!</b> I really enjoyed Matty, a street-smart orphan. Sherlock treated him as his equal, and Matty was important to the plot and solving the crime. In Conan Doyle’s books, Sherlock takes the lead in detection, but I liked how Sherlock needed his friends in this book. Victoria, a sort-of sidekick and love interest, was an equal partner in facing down the villain as well.<br /><br />2. <b>An interesting villain</b>. The villain’s backstory, his particular weaknesses, and the why behind his actions were some of the most interesting parts of the book. Behind every good plot is strong villain!<br /><br />3. <b>A large canvas.</b> It was fun that the plot took place in lots of locations—London, the countryside, a boarding school, France, a water boat, a tunnel under London. <br /><br />4. <b>High stakes</b>. The bad guys are really bad and do not shrink from trying to harm a child. This makes this book a little on the violent side for MG, but the high stakes led to a fast paced read.<br /><br />5. <b>Great fun for Holmes fans!</b> It’s always fun to imagine your favorite character in another setting. Although at times he was less eccentric than the original Holmes, I really enjoyed reading about Sherlock at 14. Mycroft makes a few appearances as well!<br /><br />Minor Quibbles: Due to the multiple murders and attempted murders, I would classify this as upper MG and not for sensitive readers.</p><p><br />What mysteries have you loved lately?</p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-cQaWZF6vzpA/U1vd87rkCkI/AAAAAAAAAYY/7KsCdWSOu40efka56oLDn4fub8Ey2O9RgCPcBGAYYCw/s200/MMGM2.jpg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="200" data-original-width="200" src="https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-cQaWZF6vzpA/U1vd87rkCkI/AAAAAAAAAYY/7KsCdWSOu40efka56oLDn4fub8Ey2O9RgCPcBGAYYCw/s0/MMGM2.jpg" /></a></div>If you'd like to read more middle grade reviews or join in the MMGM fun, go to <a href="https://gpattridge.com/">Greg Pattridge's Always in the Middle</a> blog. <br /><br /><br /><p> </p><p><br /></p>Jennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13139361928785566916noreply@blogger.com23