MMGM: Wired for Fun: A Review of Hertz Gets Fused

 

My heart sings when I find middle grade books that capture the boy voice well. Like here and here. Last summer I discovered Hertz Gets Fused by Suzanne Purvis. Hertz reminds me of the characters in Gordon Korman books: a kid who loves being a kid and fun is his ultimate goal.

Unfortunately, having fun (in Hertz’s case, video gaming) gets him in a bit of trouble and turns his whole summer upside down.

Synopsis:

Tech-obsessed twelve-year-old Hertz Zindler gets into Godzilla-sized trouble when he accidentally starts an electrical fire in his bedroom. Bad enough, all his tech stuff is ruined, but worse—Avis, his mom’s guide dog, gets grazed by a fire truck leaving the scene and the poor dog is traumatized and unable to guide.

Hertz’s mom heads to Texas to train with a new guide dog, and Hertz and Avis head to Show Low, Arizona where an unconventional great-uncle has agreed to babysit Hertz. Not what Hertz planned for his summer. He’s stuck in an Airstream trailer park for retirees, struggling to squash his shame and hide his boredom.

Then a flicker of hope. The town-sponsored scavenger hunt provides the means—a cash prize! If Hertz wins, he can buy a used laptop at the local pawn shop and get reconnected.

But Hertz’s past, along with a string of dumpster fires, have him labeled as the sheriff’s number one arson suspect.

Now Hertz must build a team, win the scavenger hunt, avoid the sheriff, and expose the real fire starter or he could end up in juvie jail. (from Amazon)

Highlights of Hertz Gets Fused:

1.    A novel in verse. I don’t read many novels in verse, but this one worked on so many levels. It’s perfect for Hertz’s voice and is infused with humor and heart. Also, the sparse text will appeal to reluctant readers. One of my favorite lines (although it’s hard to pick) is when Hertz sees his house on fire and debates about telling his mom:  “I delay my launch/of the truth starship.” 

2.    A realistic boy protagonist, who happens to be a gamer: Reading about Hertz reminded me how many of former students love to game. Hertz’s voice was authentic, and kids will relate to his dilemma. My younger son didn’t like Hertz because he was so self-centered at first, but trust me, stick with him, and he grows on you.

3.    Memorable characters: Hertz, his mom, Pops, Hertz’s great uncle, and his scavenger hunt partners, Fey and Allen, leap off this page. This is in part to Suzanne’s memorable descriptions, like this one about Pops: “The rodent over his left eye twitches. / Might be a wink.”

4.    A fun plot: For a fairly short (207 page) novel with sparse text, Suzanne packed in a lot of plot. I really enjoyed reading about the Scavenger Hunt, the zany people of Show Low, and how Hertz always managed to get himself into the craziest situations.

5.    A perfect ending. The ending was filled with action (and peril for Avis the dog!), and Hertz proves in more than one way that he’s really truly changed.

Max, the Reading Dog*

 

 

 

Max’s Take ( on a five bone scale): 🦴🦴🦴🦴

Finally, a book with an interesting dog! Avis is a survivor and my hero. He’s not just a minor character either. Woof! Woof!

 

 

About the author:

I'm Suzanne Purvis, a writer and artist transplanted from Canada to the often unnoticed, and sometimes forgotten coast of the Florida Panhandle. Wedged up against Alabama and Georgia, the Deep South oozes into this corner of Florida, and once you visit you won't want to leave. That's what happened to me. Hard to resist the sweet tea, sweeter accents, the sugar white beaches, and turquoise waters of the Gulf of Mexico. 
I write poetry and fiction of the long, short, and flash variety for both children and adults, usually with a touch of humor. (from https://www.suzannepurvis.com/) 

 

*If you're a dog lover, check out her page all about her dogs! 

Suzanne has another book coming out next year: 

 

Your Turn:

Do you like novels in verse? What are your favorite reads this summer?

 

MMGM: Breaking the Fourth Wall: Richard Ayoade’s Hilarious Ode to Unloved Books

 

After reading The Fairy Tale Fan Club, I wanted to check out other books by Richard Ayoade. When I discovered he wrote a book with a very intriguing title, The Book That No One Wanted to Read, of course I had to check it out.

If you like whimsical books that break the fourth wall, are a little zany, and of course, don’t take themselves too seriously (as all books should), you will love this book!

Synopsis:

From actor-author-broadcaster-comedian-filmmaker Richard Ayoade comes a book narrated by . . . a book. Quirky, smart, and genre-busting, this is the saga of a book that nobody wants to read—until the day it meets YOU.

The life of a book isn’t easy, especially when people judge you by your cover (not every book can be adorned with sparkly unicorns!). And this narrator should know—it’s the book itself, and it has a lot of opinions. It gets irritated when readers bend its pages back, and it finds authors quite annoying. But it does have a story to tell. Through witty direct address and charming illustrations, readers meet a book that has never been read, with a cover the boring color of a school lunch table and pages so dry they give bookworms indigestion. But what happens when this book meets you, a curious reader.  (excerpted from Amazon)

Highlights of The Book That No One Wanted to Read:

 
1.    A book as the narrator/main character. I’ve seen a trend of more middle grade books being “written” by inanimate objects. And I even wrote a short story told from the point of view of a book. I think readers who enjoy the asides of omniscient narrators like Lemony Snicket or the narrator in Incorrigible Children of Ashton Place will enjoy Ayoade’s book narrator.

2.    You are a character in this book too! Second person is not often done in middle grade, but it really works here. I really enjoyed the dialogue between the book and you (the child)—and I think kids will too.

3.    Illustrations and diagrams. From "Invisibility Problems," to "How to Control a Camel," to comics entitled “Getting a Book to Admit It’s a Book”—there are delightful illustrations by Tor Freeman throughout. These, of course, add to the fun and whimsy of the book that no one wants to read—yet. 

p. 55 The Book That No One Wanted To Read

4.    An ending that is funny and touching. I wasn’t sure where the story was going through most of this book, but it ended on the right note—giving kids something to do and giving the book as a character an arc. Is that even possible for a book to grow? Maybe it is.

5.    Lots of learning about story in a humorous way: Ayoade touches on stock characters, plot structure, libraries, and other book elements in a fun way. Kids—and adults—always learn best with some laughter thrown in.

6.    And of course, tons of laugh out loud humor!

Max, the Reading Dog*

Max’s Take (on a five bone scale):🦴🦴

Lots of animals in this story: donkeys, worms, louses, alligators, chickens, but no dogs. Dogs like to read too! Instead of a book worm, why not a Reading Dog? Ugh!

 

 

 

Your Turn:

What is the funniest book you've read lately? Do you like unusual narrators or books that break the fourth wall?

 

MMGM: Travel to the Past on The Cargo of the Madalena

 

Don't be fooled by this cover. The book is more exciting. I promise!

When my boys were younger, we loved reading historical fiction together, especially if it was immersive with a lot of details of the time. Adam of the Road, The Birchback House, and The Door in the Wall were a few favorites that live on in family yore.

When Valinora Troy, another MMGM blogger, recommended Ring Out Bow Bells, I thought it might be a similar read. Unfortunately, I couldn’t get my hands on that title, but I discovered another by Cynthia Harnett: The Cargo of the Madalena (originally published as The Load of the Unicorn in 1959). 

If you like immersive reads with a lot of historical details and illustrations and maps galore, you will love this book!

Synopsis:

Bendy, whose family runs a scrivener's shop in fifteenth-century London, solves the mystery when the master printer, William Caxton, fails to receive the paper shipped to him aboard the cargo ship "Madalena." (from Goodreads)

Highlights of The Cargo of the Madalena:

1.    A relatable main character. I’m always excited to find middle grades, especially historical fiction, with a boy main character. I totally felt for Bendy, who’s caught between his half-brothers who are  running their father’s scrivener business and his father, who’s trying to stick up for Bendy, but being pushed out by his older sons. Not to mention that his brothers are anti-printing press and Bendy and his father and intrigued by this new invention.

2.    Authentic period detail. This is not a time (London in 1482) that I know a lot about, but I learned so much about the scrivener business, the early printing press, life at Westminster, and the English countryside. A lot of the characters, like William Caxton, the printer, are also real historical persons.

p.132, illustration by Cynthia Harnett

3.    Illustrations by the author. I have heard that illustrations in middle grade are making a comeback. Yay! I enjoyed Harnett's drawings  of buildings, important items in the story, characters, and actions. These and the map in the back of the book really helped me to understand difficult concepts and visualize all those unfamiliar parts of the story. 

 

4.    An interesting mystery surrounding Le Morte d’Arthur. While the mystery of the missing paper was intriguing—and an attempted kidnapping gripping, I especially enjoyed the part of the book that dealt with how the most famous English version of King Arthur legends came to print.  

5.    An interesting theme that relates to modern times. Throughout the novel, as I was reading how the scriveners didn’t want the printing press to take off and ruin their business, I thought of all the transitions I've seen of an invention taking over an industry. (Remember video stores?) Of course, I couldn’t help but see the parallels with current debates over AI.

Max’s Take (on a five bone 🦴scale): 

Max, the Reading Dog*

 
Other than Bendy’s horse, there are no animals in this story! If Bendy had had me with him on his journey, he never would’ve gotten kidnapped. But it was an exciting story!

🦴🦴

Your Turn:

Have you read The Cargo of the Madalena or Le Morte d'Arthur ? What are your favorite historical fiction books or Arthurian legends?

 

ISWG: What’s Really Stopping You from Writing in a New Genre?

 

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What genre would I like to try but haven’t yet?

Does it count that I’ve dabbled a little in this genre? It’s not that I’ve never tried it. I’ve just stopped at one story: a picture book. But this summer I’ve had a few more picture book ideas fly into my brain.

My one picture book is a project I don’t quite know what to do with. My husband loves it. I’ve gotten some critiques and recently entered a SCBWI grant for it. 

But I keep thinking I’m a middle grade writer. What business do I have writing a picture book?

Yet, at one point middle grade was a great unknown. I had to learn about voice, the market, the genre, etc. I read and continue to read a ton of middle grades. Being a teacher and having to read 100 children’s books to get my degree did give me a good start.

Why don’t I do the same thing with picture books?

I tell myself the market is crowded, so I won’t be able to stand out. At our SCBWI events in Oregon, there’s always ten times as many picture book writers as middle grade and YA. I have heard that agents/editors are not interested in the type of picture book I’ve written. (And, no, it’s not rhyming.)

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But all this is self-rejection. 

An unfortunate character trait I often display with my middle grade work too.

Why do we do this? We let ideas languish in notebooks and manuscripts waste away in our computer files.

But maybe after I finish this never-ending revision on my current middle grade manuscript, I’ll see if I can turn some of those ideas into picture books.

Maybe instead of self-rejecting or staying in the place where I’m a picture book newbie, I could take a class or read more picture books. I could do what I did to make middle grade come so easily to me now: 

Learn as much as I can.

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What about you? Is there a genre you haven’t tried yet? What is holding you back?

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MMGM: The Thrilling Ride of The Jules Verne Prophecy

 

Like with epistolary novels, I've been on a hunt (no pun intended) for middle grades about treasure hunts lately. When I saw The Jules Verne Prophecy (Larry Schwarz and Iva-Marie Palmer) was set in Paris and involved Jules Verne, I knew I had to read it! 

Jules Verne has always been a favorite at my house. We watched all the classic movies about his novels and devoured his books as my sons were growing up.

What drew me in was the Paris setting. It brought back so many memories of my trip there in my twenties. A friend and I walked over the whole city, determined to try to experience Paris on $0/day. (We were broke college students.)

Luxembourg Gardens is in the Jules Verne Prophecy and it's free! *

 If you love Paris and Jules Verne, then you are in for a treat.

Synopsis:

Owen Godfrey is spending his summer in Paris studying science fiction writer Jules Verne, the brilliant mind behind Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea and Around the World in Eighty Days. When Owen and his new friends find what appears to be a dusty copy of Verne’s collected works in an old bookshop, they’re intrigued by the hidden codes written inside. As one clue leads to another, the trio gets swept up in an epic treasure hunt spanning the city—from the depths of the catacombs to the top of the Eiffel Tower, and by way of skateboard, boat, car, and even a hot air balloon!  But they quickly realize they’re not the only ones searching for the hidden riches, and that there are others who will stop at nothing to get to them first.

This fast-paced larger-than-life adventure is filled with action, high stakes, and three friends who are dead set on cracking the Jules Verne mystery.

Highlights of The Jules Verne Prophecy:

1.    A fun, engaging main character. Like last week’s post with a fun male protagonist, Owen is all over the place sometimes in his thoughts. He also loves skateboarding, which will appeal to many readers. Crazy adventures and mishaps just seem to cling to him, which is a lot of fun to read about.

2.    Cool puzzles based on a fictional Jules Verne manuscript. I thought the whole idea of Jules Verne setting up a puzzle for his fans to solve was a lot of fun. There were a ton of nods to his works which true fans will enjoy. It certainly made me want to check out more of his work!

3.    Three distinct characters that work as a team. Owen, Nas, and Rose were different and memorable in their personalities and their backgrounds. They each had strengths that helped solve the mystery. And learning not to make assumptions about a person was a key theme.

4.    Action! Action! Action! Boy, this novel though not short (346 pages), it kept me on the edge of my seat. Although I figured a few things out, there were a lot of twists I didn’t see coming but totally worked. Kids who love adventure (or movies like the Goonies) will love this.

 

5.    A perfect ending. It looks like this book is set up to be a series, but I couldn’t find any information about when or if a sequel will be released. But the ending tied things up for now in the most perfect way.

Max, the Reading Dog*

Max’s Take (on a five bone 🦴scale): 

Other than a brief mention of Laika, my hero, there are no dogs in this book. This book would’ve been so much better, if Owen had a dog. I would’ve sniffed out the clues and the villain right away. Aw, people! 🦴🦴

 

*Photo credit: photo of Max and Luxembourg Gardens by Jenni Enzor 

Your Turn:

Have you read The Jules Verne Prophecy? What are your favorite treasure hunting movies or books? 

 

MMGM: Time Traveling with a Hamster

 

When a fellow MMGM blogger highlighted this book a couple months ago, I knew I had to read it. Time travel and hamsters!

This book is one wild ride, but what I loved even more is that it has so much heart. Often people talk about plot-driven vs character-driven books as if they are mutually exclusive. But a standout middle grade has both aspects.

And this one has it in spades! In addition, I think this book, despite its length, would really appeal to boys and reluctant readers. And as a mom of two young men and a former special education teacher, I know how hard it is to find books that boys find engaging. We need more books like this!

SYNOPSIS

“My dad died twice. Once when he was thirty nine and again four years later when he was twelve.

The first time had nothing to do with me. The second time definitely did, but I would never even have been there if it hadn’t been for his ‘time machine’…”

When Al Chaudhury discovers his late dad’s time machine, he finds that going back to the 1980s requires daring and imagination. It also requires lies, theft, burglary, and setting his school on fire. All without losing his pet hamster, Alan Shearer…(from Goodreads)

My Take

 

1.    Al is boy that is relatable. He isn’t into sports, and he doesn’t have many friends, but he has a strong relationship with his grandfather and just wants to see his dad again. He has depth, and even when he’s making some crazy decisions, I still felt for him.

2.    An incredible voice and an interesting way of telling the story. I loved how Al sometimes spoke directly to the reader. He often jumps back and forth in time in telling his story—but that totally worked, since it is a time travel novel. Yet he always sounds like a 12-year-old boy.

3.    A very twisty and complex plot (a lesson on how to be cruel to your characters) Sometimes I notice that writers set up scenes where something really bad could happen, but the main character narrowly escapes. I always see that as a wasted opportunity. That never happens in this book. If something bad could happen, it usually does, and this made for a read that was very hard to put down.

4.    Family, culture, and characters. I learned so much from this book about the culture of Geodie and Punjabi culture. I loved that Grandpa Byron, who is equal parts both, considers himself first of all British. He and Al’s relationship was a highlight of the book, but all the characters, even the not-so-likable ones, were richly drawn.

5.    An amazing ending. The ending was surprising, but well-earned. It had lots of action but tons of heart. It was exactly what I was hoping for, but didn't think was possible.

If you like time travel fiction with a ton of heart and well-developed characters, you will love this book!

Max’s Take (on a five bone 🦴scale):

Max, the Reading Dog*

Well, there was that hamster who went everywhere with Al. But why couldn’t he have been a dog? Laika was the first dog in space. We need a book about a dog time traveler. 🦴🦴🦴

Your turn

Do you like books or films about time travel? What are your favorites? 

 

ISWG: What I've Learned from My Favorite Childhood Authors

Often, I get asked by other writers why I write for kids. My standard answer is that deep down I still feel twelve (or sixteen if the YA mood strikes me). Seriously, my best ideas are often based on my own or my sons’ childhood experiences. 

As Flannery O’Connor said, “Anybody who has survived his childhood has enough information about life to last him the rest of his days.”

This month’s question was relatively easy for me. These are books that not only impacted me as a person, but as a writer. When I think about what kind of writer I want to be, I think of a long list of authors who wrote so well for children that I still feel like these characters are my best friends. These are just some highlights.

What I learned from my childhood friends books:

 

Description/Characters

Description has always been a challenge for me. My drafts are usually very sparse, just dialogue, action, and inner thoughts. I usually add description as layers in later drafts. But maybe because it doesn’t come naturally to me, I love reading authors who do lush description well. And many older books do. 

What I learned from Wilder and Mongomery and Lovelace:

• People will stay with a well-rounded interesting character, even if there’s not a lot of action.

• Everyday life is beautiful and full of drama and joy.

• To capture characters and description well, pay attention to the people around you.

• Women from the past wanted to be writers too!

Humor

 

I went through a serious Roald Dahl kick as a child. I loved his smarter-than-the-adults characters, and I delighted in how the awful adults always got their comeuppance. Recently, I got to see Willy Wonka the musical, and it brought back so many fond memories. Writing humorously is something I’ve had to work on, but it comes more naturally as I learn to take myself less seriously.

 

 

What I learned from Roald Dahl:

• Humor points out the truth but in a subtle way.

• It appeals to kids.

• It is good for the soul. (And there is a lot of research that it is good for our health, too.)

 

Imagination/Fantasy:

 

 

I loved the Narnia series as a kid, but I thought I didn't like other fantasy until I started writing it. My biggest struggle with fantasy is world-building and internal logic. My first attempt at a novel was a portal fantasy, and although it is littered with issues, I still want to go back and revise it. And then because of Gail Carson Levine, I have a soft spot for fairy tale re-imaginings. Someday!

 

 What I learned from C.S. Lewis and Gail Carson Levine (whom I discovered as adult):

• I like fantasy grounded in reality.

• Fantasy can be a portal (pun intended!) for teaching truth about the real world/life.

• The best fantasies have incredible characters, world-building, and all the other elements of a good novel.

What about you? What books inspired you as a child or a teen? 

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MMGM: Dog-Loving Adventures: Wish and Wonderland

I’m a bit late to the party on Wish. I probably heard about it first on MMGM, but then a dear friend put a copy in my hands last summer. “You have to read this.” And she was right.

At first Charlie was a little hard to warm up to, but my the end of the novel, I was moved to tears. Of course, I had to find other books by Barbara O’Connor, and I was pleasantly surprised to find out that she’s a dog person like me. Read on for more about Wish, and one of my other favorites by O’Connor, Wonderland.

Synopsis of Wish

Eleven-year-old Charlie Reese has been making the same secret wish every day since fourth grade. She even has a list of all the ways there are to make the wish, such as cutting off the pointed end of a slice of pie and wishing on it as she takes the last bite. But when she is sent to the Blue Ridge Mountains of North Carolina to live with family she barely knows, it seems unlikely that her wish will ever come true. That is until she meets Wishbone, a skinny stray dog who captures her heart, and Howard, a neighbor boy who proves surprising in lots of ways. Suddenly Charlie is in serious danger of discovering that what she thought she wanted may not be what she needs at all. (from Amazon)

My take:

I loved this warm and loving portrayal of a child in foster care. I have a few friends who are foster parents, so I’m always excited to see more books about this topic. Charlie's aunt and uncle are just as well developed as the kid characters. Although this book could be heavy with all that Charlie has gone through, the project of the saving the stray dog really lightens the mood. Charlie has the most kind friend in Howard, but I also like that he's not a pushover. At times, Charlie needs a reminder that although her life has been tough, she can't take her anger on others. I also loved how Charlie went from wanting the family that she could never have to appreciating the people who truly loved her. I thought the way faith was handled was sensitive and realistic. If you love dogs, heartfelt stories, and well-earned endings, you will love this book!

 

Synopsis of Wonderland

Mavis Jeeter is fearless and bold, but she has never lived in one place long enough to have a real best friend. Her flighty mother has uprooted them again to another new home and taken a job as a housekeeper for the Tully family. Mavis wants this home to be permanent―which means finding herself a best friend.


Rose Tully is a worrier who feels like she doesn’t quite fit in with the other girls in her neighborhood. Her closest friend is Mr. Duffy, but he hasn’t been himself since his dog died. Rose may have to break a few of her mother’s many rules to help Mr. Duffy―and find someone who really understands her.


Henry has run away from home, but he craves kindness and comfort―and doesn’t know where to look for them.

When Mavis and Rose hatch a scheme to find Mr. Duffy a new dog, their lives and Henry’s intersect―and they all come to find friendship in places they never expected.

My take:

This story centered around a friendship between two girls who couldn’t be more different. O’Connor showed how Mavis, full of energy and spunk, and Rose, shy and timid, could bring out the best in each other. I ached for Mavis because her mom never stayed in one place or one job for long, but Mavis handles her mom with humor and her life circumstances never quell her joy for life. I'd love a friend like her! I didn't think that three POVs (one is Henry, the dog) would work, but it really makes for an interesting read and lets us get to know all the characters well. This book had such a satisfying ending. I couldn't imagine it any other way. And we're left with hope, absolutely necessary for middle grade. Another one for dog lovers who like books with friendship and a lot of heart!  

Max, the Reading Dog*

 

Max’s Take (on a five bone 🦴scale):

 🦴🦴🦴🦴🦴Best MMGM ever! I would read any book by O’Connor. Dogs who get rescued make the best characters!

Your turn

Have you read Wish? What are your favorite books with dog or animal characters? Yay or nay on books from animal's point of view?

 

MMGM: Once Upon a Review: The Fairy Tale Fan Club

 

A few weeks ago, I spotlighted my favorite epistolary reads—or MG novels in alternate formats. After I published that post, I saw this book still sitting on my dresser. I just read it, and how could I have forgotten it?

It has all the things I love: nods to fairy tales, humor, and of course, a different format.
If you like fairy tales and love to laugh (or know someone who does), you will love this book!

Synopsis

What if you could send fan mail to your fairy tale idols? And what if they wrote back? 

“Happily ever after” takes on a new meaning in this book from actor-comedian-author Richard Ayoade and best-selling illustrator David Roberts.

It’s once upon a time . . . as only the irreverently witty Richard Ayoade can tell it. In this series of letters organized by C. C. Cecily, Senior Secretary of the Fairy Tale Fan Club, the fairest of them all (and a few bitter foes) correspond with curious—and opinionated—fans. So if you’ve ever wondered how a less-than-genius (and less-than-clothed) emperor fell for a certain con, how the Big Bad Wolf is handling meatless Mondays, or whether Rapunzel recommends going for the big chop, no need to look far, far away. Multihyphenate Richard Ayoade, author of The Book That No One Wanted to Read, hilariously imagines what questions modern children would have for characters such as Sleeping Beauty, Prince Charming, and Little Red Riding Hood—and what they might have to say in return. Complete with clever, spoof-gothic illustrations from David Roberts, this wry storybook may have even the Brothers Grimm cackling in their graves. (from Amazon)

My Take

1.    This book has voice in spades and a narrator with his own story. The frame of the story is that C. C. Cecily (ha!) has been collecting these letters as Secretary of the Fairy Tale Fan Club. He also provides intros to each of the letters.

2.    It's fun to revisit all your favorite characters.  Whether you’ve been dying to learn more about Little Red Riding Hood, the Big Bad Wolf, or the Emperor (as in the Emperor’s New Clothes), it’s all here. 

3.   Fairy tales don't always make logical sense, so getting an insider's view was intriguing. Some of my favorite letters were from the prince (who had the princess and pea to stay), Pinocchio’s Puppet Pros and Cons list, and Cinderella’s letter in which she thinks an i-pad is a type of sponge.

4.    The letters often compare the written version to the movie version. This adds a lot of humor, but my teacher mind could see how this could be useful for compare and contrast lessons in the classroom and would appeal to kids who have watched movie adaptions.

5.    Just because a book doesn’t have a traditional plot doesn’t mean it can’t be enjoyable. The letters are episodic, although they don’t necessarily tell a contained story. I found this delightfully refreshing.

6.    This book is just plain fun! In my experience, kids are looking for books that make them laugh.

 

Max, the Reading Dog*

Max’s Take (on a five bone 🦴scale):

The only dog mentioned was in the letter to Cinderella. Zora complains about her sisters watching dog videos. But if they're watching videos of dogs, they can't be all bad. Don't get me started on the Big Bad Wolf, even though we are distantly related. I'd never eat Little Red or her grandmother.

🦴🦴🦴

Your turn

Do you like fairy tales? What books make you laugh? What do you think about episodic books?

 

ISWG: Are you Afraid of Success or Failure?

 

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Years ago, I remember reading a post by Veronica Roth (The Divergent Series) about planning for success rather than failure. Try as I might, I couldn’t find the original post, but this quote by her captures the same idea:

One piece of advice I have is: Want something else more than success. Success is a lovely thing, but your desire to say something, your worth, and your identity shouldn’t rely on it, because it’s not guaranteed and it’s not permanent and it’s not sufficient. So work hard, fall in love with the writing — the characters, the story, the words, the themes — and make sure that you are who you are regardless of your life circumstances. That way, when the good things come, they don’t warp you, and when the bad things hit you, you don’t fall apart. –Veronica Roth, 

I’ve often wondered if I’m afraid of success. 

1.    I have a tendency to never think my work is “ready” or done.

2.    If I am successful, will the people I know in real life be offended in some way by what I write? (This actually happened in a hilarious novel I read recently, Miss Buncle’s Book.) 

3.    Will I get invited on worldwide book tours and never have time for my family or what really counts? (Ha! Ha! Probably not going to happen.)

Yet at the same time, I’m afraid of failure.

1.    I have a tendency to never think my work is “ready” or done.

2.    I hate getting rejections. Try as I might, I’ve never been able to completely toughen my thin skin.

3.    And then there’s always the nagging question: What if my work is really bad or worse than I thought?
 

Recently I found out that my manuscript DEAR DIANA is a finalist for the Cascade Award with Cascade Christian Writers. Last summer this same manuscript was a finalist in ACFW.
 

I hadn't entered a writing contest for a novel length work in over a decade.
 

When I told my sister that I was a finalist last summer and that I hardly ever enter contests, she said, “Maybe you’d win more contests if you entered more.” Ah, the wisdom of sisters.

Right now, I am forcing myself to follow her advice. I have entered three different contests/awards this year. I plan to enter at least one more this summer. I’m letting my manuscript rest right now, but I will soon do a last pass so I can start submitting it. And I will make myself press send.

Entering contests has taught me something. It’s taught me to work to a deadline AND to accept that my work may never be perfect.

My husband, who’s an artist, likes to remind me that a piece of art is never done. You just decide when to walk away, which I have also learned as I've dabbled in watercolor.

A Christmas card I painted

 

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What about you? Are you more afraid of success or failure? Or both?

 

MMGM: From Letters to Lists: Middle Grade Novels in Unique Formats

As I mentioned in a previous post, I’ve been reading a lot of epistolary novels lately. Part of this is for research as I was writing my epistolary novel WIP, which was just announced as a finalist for the Cascade Award. Part of it is that I'm a long-time journal and letter writer myself. I've had many pen pals over the years and still keep in touch over snail mail with my "bosom friend" from age six.

The interesting thing about unique formats is that they are often character-driven or quiet stories, but the unique format brings an extra element of fun that engages young reader.

In all my reading of unique formats (not all of these are in letters), these are my favorites. 

Annie’s Life in Lists by Kristin Mahoney

 

Annie likes to make lists! This whole book is told in lists with a few breaks of narration where it makes sense for the story. I loved reading about Annie, who is both quiet and a noticer, something I haven’t seen before in middle grade fiction. As a couple people in my own family are noticers, I could relate to how she catches all the details of people’s appearance and mannerisms and never forgets them. And then her family has to move--and she blames herself. What I loved most about this story is how Annie navigates the ups and downs of new and old friendships, how she learns not to be embarrassed of being a noticer, and how she finally trusts her own voice.

This Journal Belongs to Ratchet by Nancy Cavanaugh

 

This “journal” is really Ratchet’s language arts notebook. She’s homeschooled, but mostly left to her own devices as her father is busy as a mechanic. She wants to find out what happened to her mom, who left the family, but is now dead, and to make new friends. But her dad, who’s a bit of a character and an activist, makes things a challenge. I thought O’Connor did an amazing job of using an interesting format (language arts assignments) to tell a story. As a former homeschooler, I always love seeing homeschoolers in books. But I’d really love to about a kid who likes homeschooling—something I have yet to find. This novel is heartfelt and very memorable.

Dear Max by D.J. Lucas (a.k.a.  Sally Grindley)

This book is a novel in letters in which a boy writes letters to an author. Throughout the novel, Max and D.J. discuss the book Max is writing for class, the author’s books and writing process, and many other things. It's definitely a book that would appeal to writers, and my fourth grade self would have loved this book. This is illustrated with an on-pitch middle grade boy voice. It’s always lovely to find books with boy characters. I was always on the hunt for them when my boys were elementary age, and they seem to be getting harder to find. If you’re looking for a fun, character-driven read for boys, this would be perfect.

Max’s Take (on a five bone 🦴scale):

Max, the Reading Dog*

Annie’s Life in Lists: No dogs!  But there is a racoon family that lives in their basement for awhile. I’d probably have fun chasing them if I lived nearby. Annie probably wouldn’t like that. 🦴🦴

This Journal Belongs to Ratchet: They call Ratchet's Dad Racoon Dog “because anyone who can fix your car is man’s best friend,” but that doesn’t count as a real dog. 🦴

Dear Max:  It's got a great title! And D.J. (the author) has a dog named Ambush (and a cat, unfortunately). And Max knows you need to include animals. His story is about a bear, Grizzle.  🦴🦴🦴🦴

Your Turn:

Do you like novels in unique formats? What is your favorite?

 

If you'd like to read more middle grade reviews or join in the MMGM fun, go to Greg Pattridge's Always in the Middle blog.